Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Sleepy Lagoon Murder

Sleepy Lagoon Murder
I would like to self-nominate this article. If the article is not appropriate, would you please make comments on how to improve it? Thanks Joaquin Murietta 02:01, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Obvious oppose. This article is nowhere near FA standards, but we can give you some advice on how to start it on the way. See What is a featured article and most importantly How to write a great article for how to develop the article at present. Then when you feel it's ready, refer the article to peer review and see what others think. Hope that helps. Harro5 02:14, 4 November 2005 (UTC)
 * Thank you! I will withdraw the self-nom and go over to peer review. Much obliged. Joaquin Murietta 06:36, 4 November 2005 (UTC)