Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Southern United States/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted 06:03, 17 February 2007.

Southern United States
This article is well-written, with GA status and good standard of neutrality, even it is a sensitive subject. Wooyi 03:41, 9 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Oppose. Not nearly enough inline citations, as is illustrated with a template in one section, even. Some of the existing citations seem to be improperly done. I enjoy these geography articles, but this one is not well-cited by FA standards.  JHMM13  [[Image:Lion of Venice.jpg|26px| ]] 07:28, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose. Needs more a lot more citations, less lists, bigger lead 2 or 3 paragraphs, has 3 citation needed tags, has a "This section does not cite its references or sources" tag, references are missing details such as author and publisher, problem with ref #17 - ^ Template error: argument title is required, white space and one sentence paragraphs. M3tal H3ad 12:48, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose lead is too short for starters. Quadzilla99 18:39, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Oppose. Tiny lead, few inline citations. Try WP:PR.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 04:08, 14 February 2007 (UTC)
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