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Stefan Nemanja
Stefan Nemanja was a very talented military strategist, a holy man, a cunning politician as well as a forger of a Realm. I have vastly raised it from a tiny stub into a large, sourced article, split on sections and with several images just add some flavour to the top. I think that it's sufficient for a featured article - if not, any recommendations shall I seriously take into consideration regarding its improving. --HolyRomanEmperor 20:30, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Object. In addition to lacking references (which are vital for any article to be considered as a FA), the article appears to be very POV in supporting Nemanja, as evidenced by the fawning lead. I'd also like to see a section placing the person in a historical context and a section providing criticism of Nemanja. Best, --Alabamaboy 20:40, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Object Image problems. Every image in the article has been haphazardly tagged NoRightsReserved. Not one of them has a verifiable source. Looks like Image:Simeon.jpg might be trying to claim PD-art? Image:Stefan Nemanja.jpg might be Permission and need deleting? Image:Nemanja pecat.jpg is probably nsd (no artist information, other than that they were an amateur). Image:Stefan Nemanja povelja.JPG might be PD-ineligible if it is just the reproduction of the original text. Jkelly 20:47, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Object, primarily per Alabamaboy. The language also needs to be cleaned up by a native speaker of English, as there are a variety of terms used (e.g. "Republic of Venetia", "Nirnberg", etc.) that are incorrect or archaic. Kirill Lokshin 20:56, 30 June 2006 (UTC)
 * Object per all above. Rlevse 23:44, 4 July 2006 (UTC)