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The Death of Superman

 * Nominator(s): JOE BRO  64  19:42, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

"The Death of Superman" is an infamous 1992—1993 crossover event in which DC Comics killed their icon, Superman. Now, comic book publishers killed major characters all the time— Uncle Ben, Elektra, Jason Todd, the list goes on. Those characters were minor ones who did not have a significant impact on the wider public. But Superman—the Big Blue Boy Scout, the first superhero—was a cultural icon. Chances are, if you can remember what was going on in late 1992, you can at least vaguely recall the media storm that followed the news that Superman had bit the dust because of a giant sunburned Ninja Turtle. Of course, you can't make much money off of the licensing of a corpse, so DC then published this lengthy storyline that involved five different versions of Superman, Green Lantern, Mongul, a missile, and a robotic city. Because comics. "The Death of Superman" has been adapted numerous times, including in the successful but critically panned 2016 film Batman v Superman: Dawn of Justice.

Anyway, I've been building this article since April and got it to GA status in May. Since then, I've greatly expanded the article, with numerous interviews, reviews, retrospectives, and other sources. I'd also like to thank for lots of invaluable research. Now, you'd better review this article quickly before Doomsday comes for you and you lose your chance! JOE BRO  64  19:42, 17 November 2018 (UTC)

Support by DWB
I'll take a more detailed look later but first thing that stands out to me is that the first sentence says "was". It still is a crossover event that took place in DC Comics, so talk about it in present tense. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 10:08, 19 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. JOE BRO  64  11:43, 19 November 2018 (UTC)
 * , just wanted to ask if you were still planning on taking a look (it's 100% fine if you're not, just curious) JOE BRO  64  20:49, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I don't get as much time on here as I used to and sadly forgot about this. While the content is robust, has the article gone through a copy edit? There are a lot of re-used words such as "conceived". I've taken a quick run through the opening paragraphs to tidy it up but it may be worth seeing reviewing the text to see if it can be cleared up a bit. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 22:24, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I took a quick look yesterday and did some c/e. I'll do some more tomorrow. JOE BRO  64  02:02, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
 * copyedited JOE BRO  64  21:00, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi Joe, I will take a look tomorrow. If I don't respond tomorrow message me to remind me. I will fit it in. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 22:03, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Given the tidy up and the overall comprehensiveness of the article I am inclined to support. I would have maybe waited to nominate it until the second animated film is released to add commentary on how they differ, if at all, and the reactions, given how soon it comes out, but I don't see that as a reason to withhold my support. Darkwarriorblake / SEXY ACTION TALK PAGE! 20:08, 12 December 2018 (UTC)

Comments by Favre1fan93
I'm going to leave some comments regarding this article. As I've indicated to the nominator, my time currently editing is limited and I will hopefully get through the full article and review in a timely manner for them. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 18:40, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * The crossover, devised by - change devised to conceived
 * Done. JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * It was published in - after this phrase, perhaps add "the titles"
 * I don't feel this is necessary because I think the first sentence makes it clear that it's published in comics. JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Okay no problem. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * "The Death of Superman" is divided into three parts. - change parts to story arcs
 * Done. JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * You should add back "three" though, so its "divided into three story arcs". - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed JOE BRO  64  16:30, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * the rest of the DC Universe mourning to his death - "to" isn't needed
 * Whoops, that's a typo. Fixed JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * ending with his adoptive father Jonathan - pipe the link to Jonathan and Martha Kent to read "Jonathan Kent"
 * Done JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * "The Death of Superman" established a number of characters - All three characters you listed after this debuted in this storyline, correct? If so, then it "established" should be "introduced". Established seems to indicated they were created previously and gain more prominence because of this storyline
 * Done. I'd chosen established because some of them had technically appeared beforehand, but were not developed much. JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Great. Yeah, I think for all intents, "introduced" is better, because I'm sure those earlier introductions were for their use in this story line. - Favre1fan93 (talk)
 * received unprecedented coverage from the mainstream media and caused a sensation - what sensation? Please clarify this, or change the word
 * I've cut it because I don't think it's necessary. What I meant by "sensation" that it was such a big event. JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I knew what it meant, just trying to get to the use of it in the sentence as you intended. I like it not being used there as well. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Retrospective reviewers are divided, with some finding the story ambitious and influential, while others dismiss it as a publicity stunt - move "the story" after divided and change its current use to "it", making the sentence Retrospective reviewers are divided on the story, with some finding it ambitious and influential, while others dismiss it as a publicity stunt
 * Done. JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * a beat 'em up video game in 1994 - the link here is an WP:EGG link
 * Remedied <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * A loose animated adaptation - add "film" after animated
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * A second animated adaptation will be released as a two-part film, The Death of Superman and Reign of the Supermen, in 2018 and 2019. - the first film was already released so "will be released" isn't correct. Please rephrase
 * Rephrased to: A second, two-part animated adaptation was announced in 2017; the first part, The Death of Superman, was released in 2018, while the second, Reign of the Supermen, will be released in 2019.
 * Can you please add "film" again in your newly rephrased sentence? Just want to be super clear that they are films and not TV series. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  16:30, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Background

 * A comma is needed after 1938
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Superman's comics take place - Should just be "Superman comics"
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure the entire first paragraph is needed. I don't see how having that info is relevant to this particular storyline. The info a reader needs to know as background really starts in the second paragraph about Crisis and Byrne.
 * I've removed a bit about the fact he was created as a villain but I'm hesitant to remove some of the other details. The DCU concept is important because this storyline is a crossover, and the original Superman comic launching in 1939 connects to Byrne's relaunch. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm okay with the reword, and keeping the 1939 info. But I don't think you need these sentences: Superman comics take place within a shared universe called the DC Universe, which also includes characters like Batman, Wonder Woman, and the Flash, among others. This allows plot devices, characters, and settings to cross over with each other. This isn't necessary to know with this storyline being a crossover. If anything, I would rather you expand on this sentence Connecting stories also became harder due to the new, diverse creative teams, whereas Byrne had managed most of them on his own. from paragraph 3, but I think by itself, you are understanding that Byrne did stories himself, and once he left, it was hard for the new teams to make interconnected stories across the books. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * How does it look now? I've added a mention that under Byrne the Superman comics became interconnected, and added a footnote explaining the DCU stuff.
 * I still don't think you need that. Much like the concern over the Vertigo note, this is some extra info that the reader doesn't need to understand this story. Another thought, looking at this again, is if you gave a very short description of what Crisis did for Superman in the reboot after that opening sentence, or a bit on what Byrne's re-envisioning looked like, I think you'll be good to go. Also, you need to move the first link to DC Universe to this paragraph. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:36, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed the footnote and explained a bit about the reboot. I've clarified what the DC Universe is with this: Its conclusion resulted in the DC Universe—the shared universe that the publisher's comics, including those related to Superman, take place in—being rebooted. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:12, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The reference after The relaunch was a major success for DC should move to the end of the sentence per WP:REFPUNC
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Byrne also wrote and illustrated Action Comics and worked on The Adventures of Superman with artist Jerry Ordway. - What was Byrne's work on Adventures? I'm assuming as writer. Please clarify
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * He spent two years on the Superman comics before leaving - after "leaving" put "in 1988", just to help contextualize the time period we are dealing with
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * A unique method of making the writers work together, the summit focused their attention on the next year's worth of stories. - reword to The summit was a unique method of making the writers work together, focusing their attention the the next year's worth of stories. That reads better to me
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * These meetings were often dysfunctional. According to Superman writer/penciler Dan Jurgens, "Generally,... - combine these sentences. Something like These meetings were often dysfunctional, with Superman writer/penciler Dan Jurgens noting, "Generally...
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Carlin recalled that often had to act like a babysitter for the eighteen divergent, artistic egos crowded in one room. Often, the teams compromised. - missing "he" between "often and "had". Also, combine these sentences as well
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * You need to add a title for Paul Levitz so we know what he was within DC. Was he an editor at this time or the publisher?
 * Editor. Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * so a fourth comic, writer Louise Simonson and penciler Jon Bogdanove's Superman: The Man of Steel, started - rephrase as so a fourth comic Superman: The Man of Steel, written by Louise Simonson and pencilled by Jon Bogdanove, started
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * While the teams - add "creative" before teams
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * "a fraction" of the numbers bestselling comics - there should be a hyphen in "bestselling" I believe. Also, can you see if there is a reference quantifying the sales numbers of Spider-Man. It would help for comparison to the Superman numbers
 * "Bestselling" is grammatically correct without a hyphen . I did find a reference saying that Spider-Man sold 500,000 copies on average in 1992. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:38, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Since that link is in regards to the Amazing Spider-Man title, and you had the prose formatted to go to the Peter Parker: Spider-Man title, I think you should adjust. Make the prose "a fraction" of the numbers bestselling comics featuring Spider-Man enjoyed (no formatting on Spider-Man to be talking about the character and not a single book). The Washington Post source doesn't indicate they were talking about the Peter Parker title anyways. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:07, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

Development

 * Ordway's caption should have a citation because you are describing something he did, not simply identifying him
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * DC sister company Warner Bros. - make DC "DC's"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Superman brand to remain consistent across forms of media. - add "all" between across and forms
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * the teams needed new event to replace it - need an "a" after needed
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine Carlin liked the idea. and In the documentary film Look, Up in the Sky: The Amazing Story of Superman, he recalled, "the world was taking Superman for granted, so we literally said 'let's show what the world would be like without Superman'." such as Carlin liked the idea,[ref] and in the documentary film...
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Add (2006) after Look, Up in the Sky: The Amazing Story of Superman
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine Jurgens formally pitched "The Death of Superman". and DC let the project move forward, which shocked Ordway. Probably just with an "and" between them, and then the ref for the old first sentence moving to after the period.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Siegel felt it was "a good way to shake things up." The teams felt better knowing he approved - use a semicolon to combine these sentences over two individual sentences
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Bogdanove recalled the story - add "how" after recalled
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Jurgens created the concepts of a monster tearing apart - add "had" after Jurgens. Also, just to clarify for myself and that I'm reading this correctly, the monster tearing apart Metropolis was one idea, and a singular fight was another. Those two got put together for this storyline, so it was a single fight that destroyed Metropolis.
 * Done. And yea you're reading it correctly <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * the works of Image Comics inspired it. - what works? The titles published or existing characters and designs?
 * I believe this was one of the bits I got from your sandbox. Does the source go into any detail? <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  17:19, 22 November 2018 (UTC)
 * It only mean the general Image style. No specific title or author was mentioned. Argento Surfer (talk) 13:10, 23 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I've reworded it slightly to make it clearer <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks Argento! In that case, let's reword those sentences to the following: Jurgens' design—a massive, muscular humanoid with bones ripping through his skin—won,[5][10] and was inspired by the design style used by Image Comics. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 22:34, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine this sentence The writers thought giving Doomsday an origin was not important. with They chose to name this villain "Doomsday" after Carlin wrote the phrase "doomsday for Superman" on the whiteboard used for planning.. Perhaps like They chose to name this villain "Doomsday" after Carlin wrote the phrase "doomsday for Superman" on the whiteboard used for planning, and did not feel giving him an origin was important. Where it was felt out of place after all the good design info.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * is not invincible and can be killed by something besides Kryptonite - I think "could" instead of can is correct here
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * had fun writing about peoples' reactions to his death - "peoples'" should be "other characters'"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * They did not intend for Superman's death to be permanent - is "they" the creatives or DC?
 * DC. Clarified <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * would be temporary - add a comma after "temporary" for REFPUNC
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * However, they delayed all Superman comics - again, is "they" the creatives or DC?
 * Creatives. Clarified <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * The media attention (see At release section) - format as such The media attention
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Furthermore, the teams knew bringing Superman back here would be illogical. They held an emergency summit at a hotel in Terrytown, New York, where they plotted the final parts of the story. - combine these as Furthermore, the teams knew bringing Superman back here would be illogical and held an emergency summit at a hotel in Terrytown, New York, where they plotted the final parts of the story.
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Format The Supermen were created using several existing characters (Eradicator, Superboy, Hank Henshaw, and John Henry Irons). as The Supermen were created using several existing characters: Eradicator, Superboy, Hank Henshaw, and John Henry Irons.
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Change Issue #500 was Ordway's last issue to The Adventures of Superman #500 was Ordway's last issue on the title
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * characters from DC's mature comics line appearing - EGG again
 * Done. I've also added a note explaining the ban. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:12, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Images: In addition to the Commons images you have in this section, I'd suggest adding an image of either the iconic spread of Lois holding the dead Superman, or perhaps a panel of Superman in his new look with long hair and black suit.
 * Added the spread <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:48, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Publication

 * The second sentence is a bit confusing to me. Perhaps the first part of that before the semicolon could be adjusted to "Doomsday!" was first alluded to in Simonson's Superman: The Man of Steel #17 (November 1992);
 * Yea I see what you mean. Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine the following to: "Doomsday!" began the following issue, in which Doomsday is unleashed and begins to carve a brutal path of destruction across America, leading to Superman's death in Superman #75 (January 1993) Also, only one reference tag is needed to cite all of that since it is the same reference.
 * Done. I've also removed the date for #75 because it's mentioned prior <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * What was the platinum edition for issue #75? If there is some info available to describe that, that'd be great.
 * I've actually removed it because it was the exact same as the collector's edition, Superman's bloody logo was just silver instead <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I found this source that talks a bit more on the platinum edition. If you think this is reliable, I'd say add the info back in along with stuff from this source. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:26, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I think the site's interesting and useful but unfortunately not reliable. Strikes me as a hobbyist site and not a journalist with credentials. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Great, no problem then. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:36, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The collector's edition cost more than the standard edition. - should be added to the listing in the previous sentence. So a collector's edition sold in a polybag with a black armband, poster, stickers, and a trading card, which cost more than the standard edition;
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * "Funeral for a Friend", which focuses - should start the second paragraph. Also, put some sort of wording in there to indicate this is the second story arc
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * all the Superman comics went on the hiatus - "the" not needed. I know you are referencing the info stated earlier in the article, but if a reader were to jump right here, they might be confused. Also, no need for the ref tag after "hiatus", as it is the same as the next ref tag that comes up
 * Done. The ref was a VE mess-up, I think. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * which ended with the release of The Adventures of Superman #500. - adjust to until the release of The Adventures of Superman #500 in June 1993.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * The final part - change "part" to "story arc" for consistency
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * the 46th issue of Green Lantern - make Green Lantern #46
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * DC "aggressively" promoted "The Death of Superman". According to Vulture's Abraham Riesman, the company had financial incentives to do so, as comic book speculation was at its peak. - shift this info to According to Vulture's Abraham Riesman, DC "aggressively" promoted "The Death of Superman" since the company had financial incentives to do so, as comic book speculation was at its peak. this will help attribute the "aggressively" to Riesman
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Link Vulture to Vulture (blog)
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:23, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * For Superman #75, DC issued a press kit... - this could maybe move up earlier in the section to where you talk about Superman 75, but I understand why it currently is where it is since it fits with the preceding sentence
 * Since this section seems tied with "Arcs" below, I would suggest combining the two of them. Alternatively, leave In May 1993, DC published a special issue... and the last paragraph in this section, and move everything else below the table in "Arcs".
 * I've shuffled most of the arc information down to overview. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)

Collected editions

 * You need sources for the 2007 omnibus collection and the 2016 reissues.
 * These technically don't need references because they're WP:PRIMARY. Anyone who has a copy of the collections can verify the details presented here. A similar thing is done at The Infinity Gauntlet, which is a GA.
 * The book themselves are PRIMARY, but I still would feel better having third party sources to cite the release dates and contents. DC's own website can be used for all of them. Also, it looks like there will be a new Omnibus printing in 2019, per that DC website link. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:36, 27 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I've added some of the DC website's info with sources.
 * This section may be better served as a level 2 header between "Reception" and "Adaptions"
 * I don't feel strongly about this, but the collected editions are technically part of the publication history so I feel like it'd be out of place to put it in between the plot and reception and adpatations. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:32, 26 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I was suggesting after reception, not right after the plot. Only because the collected editions are a bit "after the fact" and not really a thought when developing the story. This isn't major, but I think it would be good to consider moving the section where I suggested. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:36, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Arcs

 * I think it would be better to have individual rows for each title, so you can better indicate the creative teams for those titles. Here is an example of what I mean for "Doomsday!"

{| class="wikitable" width=100% ! scope="col" align="center" | Title ! scope="col" align="center" | Issues ! scope="col" align="center" | Cover dates ! scope="col" align="center" | Writers ! scope="col" align="center" | Pencilers ! scope="col" align="center" | Inkers ! scope="row" | "Doomsday!" ... ! scope="row" | "Funeral for a Friend" ... ! scope="row" | "Reign of the Supermen!"
 * The wikicode needs to be updated for the table. Please use the code I have below:
 * Updated. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)


 * Is there any way to cite all the creative teams of the issues and the issues involved?
 * I think this also falls under WP:PRIMARY; the authors are on the cover/opening pages of every issue.
 * For "Funeral for a Friend", why does Superman jump from issues 76 and 77 to issue 83? That seems like something good to cover. Also, the "#" before 83 isn't needed
 * I've added a footnote explaining it—it was an epilogue issue. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the footnote. If that information is at all possible to have a source attached to it, please do. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:36, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Characters

 * Add "Kal-El" to Superman, so "Superman (Kal-El / Clark Kent)"
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine He is the last remaining resident from the planet Krypton; his father to He is the last remaining resident from the planet Krypton after his father
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Link "Supergirl" to Supergirl (Matrix)
 * Done. Wasn't linked there because I'd mentioned her in development before reshuffling and copyediting the article before nominating it. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * but can also shapeshift - change the "but" to "and"
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * A reference is needed for the last sentence in Supergirl's description
 * Whoops, fixed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine He is wealthy, powerful, and intelligent. He is also Superman's archenemy, viewing him as a threat to humanity. to He is wealthy, powerful, and intelligent, and Superman's archenemy, viewing him as a threat to humanity. to avoid back-to-back "He is" sentence starters
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Remove making him a deadly threat to Superman.
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Add Hamilton's first name, since you use it in the synopsis below
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Swap the formatting of "Hal Jordan (Green Lantern)" to "Green Lantern (Hal Jordan)" to replicate the previously established formatting
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Image: Add art credits for each of the promotional images in the caption
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:40, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

Synopsis

 * Does "the country" mean America? If so, please use "America" there
 * Yeah it's America. Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Jimmy, Ice, Bloodwynd, and Guardian are also present at the end - You might need to introduce Ice and Bloodwynd as part of the JLI earlier. Or, in this sentence, state Jimmy, JLI members Ice and Bloodwynd, and Guardian are also present at the end just so we know who they are
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Jimmy should become Olsen for consistency with naming of other characters
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Add "President and First Lady" (and a links to President of the United States and First Lady of the United States) before Bill and Hilary Clinton
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Combine Superboy asks Steel to help him fight the Cyborg. Superman and Supergirl join the two and travel to Engine City. to one sentence
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The gas kills Eradicator and passes to Superman, but, as it evolved in Eradicator, allows him to regain his powers and defeat the Cyborg - This (The gas kills Eradicator and passes to Superman) is awkward and the "him" needs clarifying
 * Reworded to The gas kills Eradicator, but also evolves, so when it passes into Superman he regains his powers and defeats the Cyborg. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:41, 1 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm still not really happy with that. Would The gas kills Eradicators but also evolves within him. The evolved gas passes into Superman, allowing him to regain his powers and defeat the Cyborg. be work and still be accurate to the events of the story? - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:36, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Yes, implemented (I only made a minor change to avoid repetition.) <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:04, 6 December 2018 (UTC)

At release

 * pounced upon the 'story.' - What is "the story"? Because it is quoted as 'story', does it mean "The Death of Superman", the actual killing of Superman, or the news story surrounding the crossover? Maybe end the quote after "upon" to clarify what Weldon meant.
 * The killing of Superman, modified <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Move The story made the front page of Newsday. to after Weldon's quote and combine it in that sentence
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * This sensation was partially caused by it being a slow news day. - this seems trivial
 * Yea I see what you mean. Removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Mark Potts (The Washington Post) - reformat to Mark Potts of The Washington Post
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * the event - make "killing Superman"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Move the Potts quote to the end of the paragraph, and in doing that, combine The story made the front page of Newsday. after Weldon's quote
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * hit the media - make "were covered by the media"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Black Lightning (Sinbad) - make "Black Lightning, portrayed by Sinbad,"
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The Siegel info seems awkwardly attached to the end of the SNL info. I'm not entirely sure where it should go though instead of where it is
 * I've moved it down to the part about the success, as Carlin mentioned in the source that's when it happened. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  19:17, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Link "collector's item" to Collectable
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * showed up - I think you mean "purchased" here
 * Yeah, fixed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The month of release, sales from Superman #75 doubled DC's market share. - Make Sales from Superman #75 doubled DC's market share in January 1993.
 * Done, but changed it to November 1992 as that's when the issue hit stores (it's covered earlier in the article; January '93 is the cover date) <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * The four bestselling issues of 1993 were Superman-related. - I think it's worth listing these four titles
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * You should put them in the actual sentence, no need for a note here. So The four bestselling issues of 1993 were The Adventures of Superman #500, Action Comics #687, Superman #78, and Superman: The Man of Steel #22. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:53, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:55, 5 December 2018 (UTC)
 * of the high traffic - make of the increased customers
 * Done. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * fancy cover enhancements - remove fancy
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * thousands closed - If the thousands refers to retailers, which I'm assuming it does, make thousands of stores closed
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
 * investors - this doesn't seem correct, since one can't put investment in a single comic title. I'm looking at the book source and of course I can't access the full page the info is on, only a small snippet where I do see the use of "investors", but I'm assuming it means people who bought the comic?
 * Yeah, done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:22, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

In later years

 * The Death Of Sad Sack - "of" should be lowercase
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Chris Sims believes that... Weldon speculates - "believes" and "speculates" should be past tense
 * Fixed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Gerard Jones - who is he? Give him some declarative to identify him
 * Clarified <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Stern believed... - the quote here isn't needed
 * Removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I think you should somehow move Potts' thoughts from the previous section some in these first three paragraphs, because they all are about the publicity stunt angle. Reading through and getting to this section after readings Potts' thoughts makes it seem like a weird break between them
 * My problem with moving it is that the Potts stuff is contemporary, so it'd be out of place to have it in a retrospective section. For now I've just changed it to say he didn't think it'd last <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * For all the people/organizations listed, as with before, remove the around the organization. To vary them, you can use "Person of organization", "Organization's person", or "Person, writing for organization" formatting
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * if well-done, central narrative."[96] - the ref here isn't needed, since it is the same as the one after the next sentence
 * Fixed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * On the negative side - make "Conversely,"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * 90's - thought its quoted, to comply with MOS:DECADE, change to 1990s
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "more of trading cards that intend to tell a story than an actual comic story." - adjust to "trading cards to intend[ed] to tell a story than an actual comic story."
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * disliked it - what is "it"?
 * The story. Clarified <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:20, 8 December 2018 (UTC)

Legacy in comics

 * "With the industry in freefall," wrote Weldon, - adjust this. Despite these similar story attempts, Weldon commented that the industry "was in freefall" and "death/disabling stunts offered only brief sales spikes."
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * portrayed by Superman fan - add basketball player before Superman fan
 * Not sure why I didn't think of this before, added <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * was killed in Infinite Crisis (2005–2006), - ref not needed after this, as used after the Cyborg Superman info.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * featuring Doomsday include - include should be past tense
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * called the New 52 - The is capital
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * relaunched - relaunch
 * I'd noticed this right before you commented but didn't have time to fix it... done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)

Adaptions

 * Link "young adult" to Young adult fiction
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Unlink "video game" as a common term
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Add "game" after "beat 'em up"
 * IMO this isn't necessary. The previous sentence establishes it's a game, and it's kinda tautological because all beat 'em ups are video games <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * fight-to-the-death - can simply be "fight"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * the franchise - make the Superman franchise and link all of that to Superman in film
 * Done, but didn't link because it's linked in the reception section. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Warner Bros. released an animated film adaptation, Superman: Doomsday, direct-to-video in 2007. - rearrange to Warner Bros. released an animated direct-to-video film adaption, Superman: Doomsday, in 2007.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * to fit it within - remove the "it"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Superman's black suit from "Reign of the Supermen!" - remove "from "Reign of the Supermen!"
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * when he is resurrected in the films - when he was resurrected in the film
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * but scrapped the idea in the pre-production phase of Justice League. - make simply but scrapped the idea in pre-production
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Link to The Death of Superman (film). Though you do link it earlier in the Legacy section, it is piped, so another link would be helpful here (or adjust the pipe in Legacy)
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Compared to Doomsday - use the full title here for clarity
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Discussion
Some initial comments for now. Please note that after I look at text/formatting/links of each section, I will go back and make comments on references if need be. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 18:40, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Comments about the Development section added. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 20:45, 20 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Hey there, I see you've made some adjustments in the article based on my comments. If you wouldn't mind, could you add a "Done" or something below the comments above just so I know where we stand on them all? Thanks! I'm hoping to continue my review where I left off tomorrow. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 22:34, 24 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I've responded to most; there are a few I still need to work on. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  01:13, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Perfect, thanks! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 16:30, 25 November 2018 (UTC)

Added comments for "Publication", "Collected editions" and "Arcs". - Favre1fan93 (talk) 17:28, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Added comments for "Characters" and "Synopsis". - Favre1fan93 (talk) 18:42, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
 * , just wanted to let you know that I've moved the page source over to my sandbox so I can update the article there until the Vertigo dispute is settled <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  23:17, 28 November 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem. I'll monitor the changes there, and once you can implement them in the actual article, add your responses above. I hope to get through the last few sections soon with comments. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 23:19, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Added comments for "At release". - Favre1fan93 (talk) 05:11, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Added comments for "In later years" and "Legacy in comics". - Favre1fan93 (talk) 16:55, 7 December 2018 (UTC)
 * , I just wanted to ask if you think the polybagged cover of Superman #75 is technically a free image? The Superman logo is PD since it's just a triangle and an "S", and I don't think the drips of blood are original enough to make it copyrighted. <small style="color:red">JOE  BRO  64  19:25, 8 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I think you're correct. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 05:11, 10 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I've added it to the publication section. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  13:51, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
 * ...aaaand someone's tagged it for deletion <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:24, 11 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I think it should be fine. Maybe you did not use the correct public domain/trademark templates to tag it for use? - Favre1fan93 (talk) 04:08, 12 December 2018 (UTC)

Last few comments added for "Adaptions" and the references. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 19:35, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * All of my comments have been addressed. I give my support for this nomination. Well done! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 03:08, 17 December 2018 (UTC)

Support from Argento Surfer
All of my concerns were addressed during the GA review, and I have no concerns with the additions/changes made since then. Excellent work. Argento Surfer (talk) 21:52, 29 November 2018 (UTC)

Support from MaranoFan
Once this is addressed I'll support the article for promotion. Great job on the sourcing and prose. Would appreciate if you took a look at this FLC of mine which is currently inactive. Best!-- N Ø  06:44, 12 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "while the second, Reign of the Supermen, will be released in 2019." -- Change "will be released in" to "is scheduled for release in" as these things can get cancelled or delayed.
 * , done. Thank you for taking a look! I'll check your FLC later. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  12:11, 12 December 2018 (UTC)
 * This article has my support. Best!-- N Ø  12:13, 12 December 2018 (UTC)

Comments by Cognissonance

 * Before you go down the list, there are two general things I'd like you to keep an eye out for and fix. 1) Citations need to be in numerical order (e.g. 4, 11, 12, 42). Make sure that's consistent throughout. 2) There are many repeated instances of "and" creating longwinded sentences (e.g. "Steel represents Superman's nickname "the Man of Steel" and wears a suit of armor and wields a hammer. As a boy, he witnessed the death of his parents, and Superman later saved him"). These should be copyedited for better flow.

Lead

 * "antiheros" Spelling: "antiheroes"
 * Shoulda noticed this, fixed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "the teams" What teams exactly? Writing teams? Be more specific.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * There should be a period after "Reign of the Supermen!".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "bloodthirsty monster" Possible WP:POV. I suggest replacing it with "supervillain".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "repeatedly adapted into various forms of media" "repeatedly" is unnecessary.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64

Background

 * "new, diverse" "new and diverse".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "Generally, we all got in a room and toss around story ideas. A lot of times we disagreed, had some big fights, and the last person left standing was the winner and ultimately got their way" This should be paraphrased.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  00:34, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "Carlin had to act like a babysitter for the eighteen divergent, artistic egos crowded in one room, and the teams often compromised" Needs more formal language.
 * Changed to Carlin recalled that he had to act like a "babysitter" for the 18 diverse creators in a meeting <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  00:34, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Development

 * "so the stories would coincide" Improve prose: "in order that the stories could coincide".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64
 * "The postponing" "The postponement".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "the first has four per page, while the second has three" "while" is unnecessary.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "horrible ramifications" WP:POV Just stick with "ramifications".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "had to have consequences." Unless you can name the one who said this, paraphrase it. Same with "an extraordinary amount of time".
 * Added who said it to the consequences part, and paraphrased the time part <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "did not take long to make" "to make" is unnecessary.
 * Removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "Simonson stated, "we had to sign nondisclosure agreements saying we couldn’t talk about it. We couldn’t reassure people that he was coming back.”" Paraphrase: "They signed nondisclosure agreements preventing them from revealing that Superman would return."
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "the teams knew bringing Superman back here"} Clarify: "the teams knew bringing Superman back in that issue".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "Simonson suggested to let each writer" Improve prose: "Simonson suggested that each writer".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "Henshaw, who he created a few years earlier" "whom" fits better.
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Publication

 * "the height" No need for quotations here.
 * Removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Characters

 * "brave, kind-hearted" WP:POV
 * Removed
 * "He has incredible powers, including the abilities to fly, use x-ray vision, and super-strength" WP:POV. Suggestion: "He has the power of flight, x-ray vision, and super-strength".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "He is excellent at gymnastics" WP:POV. Suggestion: "He is accomplished in gymnastics".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "a brilliant inventor" WP:POV. Suggestion: "an inventor".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "He is an enemy of Superman who is much stronger than him, intelligent, and can use telekinesis" Clarify: "An enemy of Superman, Mongul is stronger than him, intelligent, and can use telekinesis".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Synopsis

 * "Project Cadmus steals his body from his mausoleum to clone him" Avoid repetition: "Project Cadmus steals Superman's body from his mausoleum to clone him".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * "they begin to build Engine City, an effort to recreate Mongul's home planet Warworld, in its ruins" Improve prose: "they begin to build Engine City in an effort to recreate Mongul's home planet, Warworld, in its ruins".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Adaptations

 * side-scrolling beat 'em up WP:OVERLINK
 * Removed side-scrolling
 * There should be a period after "Doomsday!".
 * Done <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  20:46, 13 December 2018 (UTC)

Cognissonance (talk) 12:21, 13 December 2018 (UTC)
 * , thank you so much for taking the time to review! I've responded to your points above and also did some copyediting to remove some repetition. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  00:51, 14 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Count me in as support for the nomination. Good luck. Cognissonance (talk) 09:34, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Comments from Aoba47
Great work with the article! Ths FAC has appeared to received a lot of commentary already, and it is very polished. Once my relatively minor comments are addressed, Once they are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this nomination. If you have time, I would greatly appreciate any feedback on my current peer review on an article that I would ideally like to put through the FAC process sometime in January. I understand if you are not interested or do not have time. Either way, I hope you have a wonderful rest of your week! Aoba47 (talk) 01:48, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * I do not believe that the following caption (Cover of Superman vol. 2, #75 (Jan 1993) Art by Dan Jurgens and Brett Breeding.) should have punctuation as it is a complete sentence.
 * Removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  22:57, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * For this caption (Interior artwork from Superman #75 (January 1993), depicting Lois Lane mourning the dead Superman. Art by Dan Jurgens and Brett Breeding.), I do not believe the second sentence needs punctuation as it is not a complete, standalone idea.
 * Removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  22:57, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * A wikilink for “mausoleum” seems unnecessary to me.
 * I see what you mean, removed <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  22:57, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * For the “Den of Geek” parts, I believe that it should have an exclamation point at the end.
 * Added <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  22:57, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * , thank you for taking the time to review! I've responded above and will look at your PR later this week. <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  22:57, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for addressing everything. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 23:04, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

Image review by Hawkeye7
Not a lot of images in this one. All images have appropriate licences. Hawkeye7  (discuss)  22:31, 20 December 2018 (UTC)
 * File:Superman75.jpg Fair use image, has appropriate licence and fair use rationale.
 * File:Mike Carlin.jpg Flickr CC image, Bot-verified.
 * File:10.14.12JerryOrdwayByLuigiNovi.jpg CC 3.0 image, appropriately licensed I have added a tag
 * File:Dan Jurgens (40373973904).jpg Flickr CC image, Bot-verified. I have added a tag
 * File:SupermanDeath.jpg Fair use image, with appropriate NFCC template. (Aside: terrible image. The artist has reduced the impact with clutter. Hard to tell if Lois is crying or sneezing.)
 * File:Reign of Supermen-.jpg Fair use image, with appropriate NFCC template.

Laser brain
Oppose on 1a thus far. I've just been through the lead but I find the writing to be clunky and inelegant. It's possibly at a GA standard but not what's required for a Featured article. Some examples, and I hope to make it through the rest of the text today:
 * I had trouble following the explanation in the lead of why the marriage storyline was postponed. They wanted to ensure the comic was running the story at the same time as the show? Prose needs clarity.
 * "[T]he writing teams felt the concept would allow them to explore why the character matters" This strikes me as clunky writing and I'm sure the underlying idea can be conveyed more elegantly.
 * "The third sees the emergence of the Supermen, four individuals claiming to be Superman, and the original's return." This isn't particularly clear... I had to read through a few times to understand what you are conveying.
 * "'The Death of Superman' introduced a number of characters" You're switching tenses in writing about the arc, even in the lead. -- Laser brain  (talk)  14:15, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
 * thanks for taking a look at this so far; I've just done a copyedit of the lead and Publication history. I'll get to the rest of the article very soon <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  21:37, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

indopug
I might come in with a more detailed review soon. For now, I think you should remove all the ISBNs from the prose; they make the text ugly and somewhat unreadable. In any case they're probably useless; surely search for books by googling their names rather than looking up ISBNs?—indopug (talk) 16:39, 1 January 2019 (UTC)
 * , done. Replaced the ISBNs with normal citations <small style="color:red">JOE BRO  64  22:13, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

Sarastro
Oppose on 1b and 1c: It's actually quite hard to see what references have been used as there is no bibliography with this article. There are a few print sources used, but they are listed in among the references rather than in a bibliography. And I'm not sure how well used they are; for example, the phrase "to immediate success" is cited to the whole Larry Tye book, which seems a little strange. A whole book to cite three words? Has the book even been consulted?

Furthermore, I don't think we have consulted all the available sources. I'm a little concerned that we have few print sources when a huge amount of written (as opposed to drawn) material exists about Superman, some of it quite scholarly. For example, I'm not at all an expert on Superman, but I know there is a book "Superman: The Unauthorised Biography" which would probably have quite a lot on this topic. Our article on Superman, although no longer a FA, has a list of print sources which will presumably have plenty of information on his death. A quick check on Google revealed that there is writing on the death in The Ages of Superman: Essays on the Man of Steel in Changing Times edited by Joseph J. Darowski. And a search of JSTOR shows several academic articles looking at the death of Superman. Now, it is possible that none of these sources have much in them, but I suspect they will; they were easy enough to find with just a few minutes searching. The fact that they are not used, and have possibly not even been looked at makes me think we are failing on criteria 1b and 1c (particularly the "thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature" part). And more academic sources are preferable to the online reviews and specialist websites which we seem to be mainly using for references at the moment.

A final point (again with the qualification that I'm NOT a comics expert by any means): if I recall correctly, in the 1990s there was a huge collapse in the comics market, and we only hint at this in the article. But I'm pretty sure that this was attributed to a large extent to the cash in of Death of Superman, and things like multiple printings and variant covers. It's possible I'm not making sense as this isn't my area. Just a few points on the sourcing of this topic as well:
 * "However, many retailers say The Adventures of Superman #500 was the beginning of a decline in the comic industry. Retailers and distributors were stuck with unsold copies" is referenced to page 135 of the Gearino book. I cannot see the page numbers in a google preview but I'm interested in what the source says to back up this statement. "and thousands of stores closed" is referenced to a book on Batman.
 * "Additionally, those who bought Superman #75 could only sell first printings for cover price a few months after its release" is not quite the same emphasis as in the Randy Duncan book it is sourced to. The source says "They could only recover their purchase price if they had a first printing", which is very slightly different. Our article reads as if they were selling first printings and only getting the cover price. The source says that the only way to recover the cover price is if they had a first printing. Subtly different, but still different. Incidentally, this source covers this ground quite thoroughly.

I think this article has quite a way to go on sourcing to meet the FA criteria so I'm afraid I have to oppose. Sarastro (talk) 12:39, 9 January 2019 (UTC)
 * , I had spent days looking for sources on this article and never came across those... I can't believe that. you can archive this one. I'll spend a month or so doing more research. <small style="color:red">JOE  BRO  64  20:24, 10 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Tks Joe. Can I suggest that after doing your research and improvements you ping the reviewers above for a reality check (a peer review in effect, either formal or just a discussion on the article talk page) before renominating here? Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 21:27, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

Ian Rose (talk) 21:28, 10 January 2019 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.