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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by Karanacs 17:11, 6 October 2009.

The Naked Brothers Band: The Movie

 * Nominator(s): ATC . Talk 21:00, 11 September 2009 (UTC)

I am re-nominating The Naked Brothers Band: The Movie; after User:Truthkeeper88 fixed prose and WP:MOS with a copyedit. I and Truthkeeper88 both think it meets the criteria and I am nominating it. If you detect one or two minor problem's with prose or MOS, Truthkeeper88 told me, that the user will be fixing those requests that you make below. ATC. Talk 20:46, 11 September 2009 (UTC)

Comment. Done; thanks. The lead image needs alt text as per WP:ALT. Please fill in the alt parameter of the Infobox Film template at the start of the article. Thanks. Eubulides (talk) 22:51, 11 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Done, per request from Truthkeeper88. Cheers, TFOWRThis flag once was red 16:01, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, that looks good. Eubulides (talk) 16:11, 12 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Comments -
 * http://www.nickkcapress.com/2007KCA/soundtrack.php deadlinks
 * What makes http://www.allaboutjazz.com/php/musician.php?id=11494 a reliable source?
 * All About Jazz appears to be an e-zine with a managing editor. Am having trouble connecting to redherring.com but will check that site as well. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 22:01, 16 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Likewise http://www.redherring.com/Home/22486?
 * Otherwise, sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 19:29, 16 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I deleted the Nickkacapress source as their is already a reference to the same information. Also, as Truthkeeper said, AllAboutJazz.com/ is typed by and editing manager, so it is reliable. Also RedHerring is a news article source and is reliable. ATC . Talk
 * Do you mean that Red Herring is by a news organization such as CNN, or a newspaper? Also, is All About Jazz actually sustained by subscriptions? Do other sources consider it reliable? Ealdgyth - Talk 11:35, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * All About Jazz does not appear to be sustained by subscriptions, but it does have a masthead. The text sourced by All About Jazz is can also be sourced with this if that's more acceptable. That John B. Williams played in a band with Michael Wolff doesn't seem to be controversial, so if All about Jazz and Amazon are not acceptable I can try accessing some databases for news articles if you'd prefer. Thanks. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 22:04, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Actually the information is available here in the San Francisco Chronicle. That's the best source, I'd reckon. Sorry about the multiple posts. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 22:09, 17 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Deleted and replaced http://www.allaboutjazz.com/php/musician.php?id=11494 & deleted http://www.redherring.com/Home/22486 as per ATC's consent. Thanks. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 14:46, 19 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Image review - The only image in the article, which is fair use, meets WP:NFCC. Awadewit (talk) 04:06, 26 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Support - seems pretty solid to me.
 * The band features lead singer-songwriter and keyboardist Nat, drummer Alex, guitarist Josh, keyboardist David, cellist Thomas, and manager Cooper. John B. Williams is responsible for signing the band to Who's The Man Records, the label that brought the group to fame. The film begins with the band performing "Motormouth" at the Hammerstein Ballroom. - fix the grammar problem(s), plz.
 * Rewritten. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 02:41, 6 October 2009 (UTC)


 * After watching the media talking about the band's split on television, Nat writes a song about it, titled "If There Was a Place to Hide", and fans gather pleading for the band to reunite. - comma after gather
 * Done. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 02:41, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

Good work!  ceran  thor 00:25, 6 October 2009 (UTC)
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