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Too Much Too Soon (album)

 * Nominator(s): Dan56 (talk) 04:48, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

This article is about a 1974 album by hard rock band the New York Dolls. It became a popular cult album after it originally sold poorly. Dan56 (talk) 04:48, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Comments
 * Dan56: close paraphrasing concerns have been brought up in some of your other FACs. Does the source say "a tough, loud New York accent"? If so, you may want to go back and compare the sources against your text for close paraphrasing and accuracy, before the inevitable spotcheck. - Dank (push to talk) 01:42, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
 * I've removed the sentence in question, which was in the section as filler months before I expanded it with more meaningful information from other sources. Dan56 (talk) 01:48, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
 * Understood. - Dank (push to talk) 02:18, 14 August 2014 (UTC)


 * Since the delegate brought this up, I'm not sure if any comments/review will be of consequence, so I've placed the tag above. Dan56 (talk) 09:57, 14 August 2014 (UTC)

The page can't be G7'd after more than one person has edited it, but I can archive it to prevent more discussion. It's been removed from the FAC queue, too. (unwatching) - Dank (push to talk) 10:34, 14 August 2014 (UTC)