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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Ian Rose via FACBot (talk) 12:32, 30 December 2015.

Transport in Kollam

 * Nominator(s): Arunvrparavur (talk) 10:05, 30 December 2015 (UTC)

This article is about the Transportation and mode of transports in the Indian city of Kollam. Kollam is the 49th most populated urban agglomeration in India with a total population of 18 million in the Metropolitan Area. Moreover, it is an ancient Portuguese-Dutch-British enclave and one of the oldest port cities in Asia ... Arunvrparavur (talk) 10:05, 30 December 2015 (UTC)

Oppose: Start-class article that's never been reviewed. The most obvious faults are an inadequate lead, many uncited statements, use of lists rather than text, substandard prose ("Kollam's transportation have that much of historic background"; "Kollam was the first city in South Kerala that got a rail connectivity", etc etc). Nominator perhaps needs further guidance on using the FAC nomination procedure; it is not a place where unprepared articles can be brought up to standard. Brianboulton (talk) 11:39, 30 December 2015 (UTC)

Strong oppose – Upon a quick glance of the article, it does not meet the FA criteria. I have found that many sentences lack references to reliable sources and the references are incorrectly formatted. Otherwise I concur with Brianboulton. Z105space  (talk)  12:27, 30 December 2015 (UTC)

Ian Rose (talk) 12:32, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
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