Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/William H. Seward/archive1

William H. Seward
This article should be chosen because it is easy to read, has enough citations and references, has decent images, and is well written. 11kowrom 17:41, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Object. The lead section is inadequate, and several of the sections are short, only one or two sentences in length. RyanG e rbil10 17:48, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Object Lead section needs to be expanded to properly summarize the topic. No Inline citations Deyyaz [ Talk 19:45, 20 May 2006 (UTC)
 * Object, it is a start, but some more work needs to be done:


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.


 * This article is a bit too short, and therefore may not be as comprehensive as WP:WIAFA critera 2(b) is looking for. Please see if anything can be expanded upon.


 * Please reorder/rename the last few sections to follow guidelines at WP:GTL.
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 14:30, 21 May 2006 (UTC)