Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Young Talent Time/archive1

Young Talent Time
Worth a shot IMO. PMA 03:48, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Object. You may want to look over the FA criteria.  The article has no reference section at all, and FA requires inline citations (WP:CITE would be helpful reading for this).    There are no images, which is not a strict FA requirement but would be nice, so some screencaps would work well here.  It could use some subsections to break it up a bit.  Since it's about a television show, some hard numbers on ratings would be desired.  It also needs a peer review to help smooth out the overall writing, grammar, punctuation, and NPOV tone.  The West Wing is a good example of a featured article on a television show, and may be helpful reading to those working on the Young Talent Time piece.  It's a nice start, but a long way from FA status.  Thanks!  Air.dance 04:02, 4 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Object- again, featured article requires sources as well as inline citations. Please read WP:WIAFA to see some of the guidelines for featured articles, or browse through examples on WP:FA. The article should be split into sections, with an appropriate lead section. AndyZ t 19:20, 4 April 2006 (UTC)