Wikipedia:Featured article review/Acute myeloid leukemia/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 8:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC).

Acute myeloid leukemia

 * Notified: MastCell, Tom (LT), Spicy, Mikael Häggström, Doc James, Роман Беккер, Boghog, Bibeyjj, SandyGeorgia, Ajpolino, WP MED, WP Molecular and Cell Biology, first noticed in 2021

Review section
Discussions on the talk page have noted signficant content issues including datedness; work has occurred but a fair bit still needs to be done and it's been stalled for some time. Its sad to see another one of our preciously few medical FA in this condition. Hog Farm Talk 04:18, 18 June 2022 (UTC)


 * As discussed on article talk, and with MastCell, this article is in quite bad shape. There are short choppy sections, the diagnosis section is impenetrable (even for a medical editor) and could probably benefit from being split to a sub-article and summarized back in prose reasonable for a layperson; a copyedit is needed (samples are colloquilisms like that said, most cases rather than referring to individuals, unnecessary use of subsequently, but there is much more); some sections use very dated sources (see Prognosis as one sample); pediatric AML is not discussed; and there are MOS issues throughout. There is an inconsistent citation style (see Buruli ulcer, complete blood count, dementia with Lewy bodies or menstrual cycle for examples of how to clean up citations and provide page numbers). These are only samples; the article needs a thorough overhaul from an experienced cancer person and medical editor, and needs to be brought to a place where a layperson can glean useful information.  Recent reviews need to be incorporated (samples only,  and, there is more). Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  05:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC, issues persist, minimal engagement. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  11:15, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC - significant work is still needed. Hog Farm Talk 01:13, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include currency, prose, sourcing and organization. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:11, 2 July 2022 (UTC)


 * Delist, 'tis a pity, but has not been kept current our brought to standard. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  02:11, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Delist, needs significant work. Hog Farm Talk 14:13, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Delist no progress since move to FARC. Z1720 (talk) 19:35, 15 July 2022 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 18:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.