Wikipedia:Featured article review/Aikido/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 8:31, 8 August 2020 (UTC).

Aikido

 * Notified: PRehse, article talk 2020-03-14, WP Martial arts, WP Japan

Review section
This is a 2007 promotion that is in need of a tuneup. There is considerable uncited text and un underdeveloped lead. In terms of MOS, there is incorrect use of bolding throughout, WP:BADITALICS (of foreign language proper nouns), and MOS:SANDWICH. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  18:05, 5 July 2020 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include sourcing and style. Nikkimaria (talk) 15:46, 25 July 2020 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 18:31, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist per nom and my intial comment. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  17:54, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist Per nom. - GamerPro64  02:00, 2 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist So much uncited text here. This isn't even GA-level. Easy call. Hog Farm Bacon 01:39, 5 August 2020 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.