Wikipedia:Featured article review/André Kertész/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 4:11, 5 November 2022 (UTC).

André Kertész

 * ''Notified: User talk:Spawn Man, WT:WPBIO, WT:FOTO, WT:HU, talk-page notice 2022-01-31

Review section
The most immediate problem here is the substantial amount of uncited text. Other concerns include prose issues (a lot of short, choppy sentences, for instance), long page ranges (e.g. "pp. 7–124") that make it very difficult to verify content, and lengthy lists that should be either removed or converted to prose. There hasn't been any engagement with the Jan. 2022 notice, so I'm bringing the article here for discussion. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 06:29, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC uncited information remains. Z1720 (talk) 18:16, 20 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC - sourcing issues have not been addressed. Hog Farm Talk 14:52, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC: not much progress, unfortunately. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 21:11, 21 October 2022 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include sourcing and prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:07, 22 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Delist. Unsourced statements and paragraphs, including weasel words and exceptional claims such as "limited interest", "romantically", "intrigued", "never spoke about it", "successful", "criticism", "honor", and "critically acclaimed". DrKay (talk) 14:35, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Delist - significant uncited material. Hog Farm Talk 15:50, 4 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Delist unsourced material remains. Z1720 (talk) 16:40, 4 November 2022 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 04:11, 5 November 2022 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.