Wikipedia:Featured article review/Armament of the Iowa-class battleship/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 2:29, 4 December 2021 (UTC).

Armament of the Iowa-class battleship

 * Notified: WP MilHist, WP Ships, ‎WP US,  ‎WP Iowa, talk page notification 2020-01-28 ‎

Review section
I am nominating this featured article for review because... the afd was inconclusive towards deletion, merging, or redirecting. This has grown fat and very bloated, not withstanding the fact that it is currently 100% unneeded its no longer written neutrally, contains what would be best described as original research, and is in need of featured article review to identify other areas that may be in violation of WIAFA as the community sees fit to judge. TomStar81 (Talk) 12:12, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , please notify the three WikiProjects listed on the article talk page with Armament of the Iowa-class battleship, and update the top of this page to indicate pages notified. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  13:37, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Never mind; I see you did the notifications, but didn’t list them at the top of this FAR, which I have now done. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  13:55, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that, I went to list this for FAR/C and then in the middle of filing he paperwork my computer decided it was time to reboot to finish updates so it came down to a contest of time between me and the paperwork. I got most of it, apparently, but this didn't take. TomStar81 (Talk) 14:48, 3 November 2021 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC no resolution of issues (t &#183; c)  buidhe  03:51, 17 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC per nom. Hog Farm Talk 15:46, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include neutrality and length. Nikkimaria (talk) 14:41, 20 November 2021 (UTC)


 * Delist per above (t &#183; c)  buidhe  04:15, 23 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Delist. Tagged as lacking reliable sources. DrKay (talk) 09:57, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Delist per nom. Hog Farm Talk 15:07, 30 November 2021 (UTC) Nikkimaria (talk) 02:29, 4 December 2021 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.