Wikipedia:Featured article review/Bradley Joseph/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 3:27, 11 December 2021 (UTC).

Bradley Joseph

 * Notified: Cricket02, WikiProject Biography, WikiProject Musicians, WikiProject Classical music, WikiProject Composers, WikiProject Jazz, WikiProject Minnesota, WikiProject Pop music, WikiProject United States, WikiProject American music, 2020-12-20

Review section
I am nominating this featured article for review because, as pointed out on the talk page in December 2020, there are POV and UNDUE problems in the Yanni section. I am also concerned about the quality of sources used in this article, and that there doesn't seem to be information about him post-2013. No significant improvements have been made to the article since concerns were raised on the talk page. Z1720 (talk) 21:34, 14 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC - not much happening, cites an unofficial fansite and some blogs. Hog Farm Talk 15:43, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC. In "Early life", I can't verify any of the info cited to https://www.bradleyjoseph.com/bio ... what am I missing? Also, some of what is cited to there needs to be attributed to him or seems unduly self-serving (eg, "One morning his father taught him how to play a boogie-woogie blues tune and by nightfall he could play the entire piece."  might start with, "he says" if included at all).  Another example, from the Yanni section, cited to himself is "In the band, Joseph covered a lot of the keyboard parts that Yanni could not for lack of hands in the shows."  More independent sources are needed. There is a lot of info here that is not included in the article (using better sources would be required). Nothing since 2013? (I can't find any sources.) Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  18:21, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include neutrality and sourcing. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:47, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 03:27, 11 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Delist - no engagement at all, only 5 edits so far in 2021, of which 3 have been by bots. Hog Farm Talk 19:41, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Delist - No attempts to fix the issues presented. Noah Talk 20:07, 7 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Delist, no improvement of issues raised. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  02:36, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.