Wikipedia:Featured article review/Cleomenean War/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 2:51, 28 May 2022 (UTC).

Cleomenean War

 * Notified: Kyriakos, WikiProject Military history, WikiProject Classical Greece and Rome, WikiProject Greece, 2021-05-09

Review section
I am nominating this featured article for review because, as outlined by on the talk page, there is an overreliance on primary sources within the article, which I agree with. There's also harvref errors. Z1720 (talk) 13:04, 21 April 2022 (UTC)


 * I concur that review is needed. The featured article criteria say stuff like: well-researched: it is a thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature; claims are verifiable against high-quality reliable sources and are supported by inline citations where appropriate. Repeating Polybius and Plutarch is not a "through and representative survey of the relevant literature". Ifly6 (talk) 19:35, 21 April 2022 (UTC)


 * I should add that the maps look imprecise. T8612  (talk) 10:15, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Largely cited to primary sources, which is not very satisfactory at any level, and will nearly all need replacing if this is to retain its FA status. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:33, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC - There's been so little engagement that the last 50 edits go back 10 years as of the writing of this comment. Hog Farm Talk 19:26, 3 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC per above. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  20:24, 6 May 2022 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section largely concern sourcing. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:15, 7 May 2022 (UTC)


 * Delist no edits to address FAR concerns so far. The sourcing concerns noted by subject-matter expert T8612 remain outstanding. Hog Farm Talk 13:26, 18 May 2022 (UTC)
 * Delist no edits to address concerns (t &#183; c)  buidhe  13:38, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 02:51, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.