Wikipedia:Featured article review/Coconut crab/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by User:Marskell 16:42, 25 September 2008.

Review commentary

 * Notifications at Chris73 amd WP Anthropods

Coconut crab is a 2004 promotion, lacking citations, mixed citation styles, numerous ciation needed tags, WP:LEAD underdeveloped, and MoS cleanup needed. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 04:07, 27 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Comment Definitely needs changes to structure and improvement on citations. A search on Google scholar for "Birgus latro" yields a significant number of research papers and reviews. Given that the subject may not have many exhaustive secondary or tertiary sources, one would expect it to include reviews of content from primary sources. Shyamal (talk) 10:06, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are referencing (1c), LEAD (2a), and MoS (2). Marskell (talk) 13:36, 13 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Delist lack of citations, which are incorrectly formatted.  YellowMonkey  ( bananabucket ) 03:48, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Delist Per and  as well as other issues raised above. Cirt (talk) 05:04, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
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