Wikipedia:Featured article review/Flag of South Africa/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 09:37, 19 February 2007.

Review commentary

 * Messages left at Heraldry and vexillology, PZFUN Jeffpw 22:27, 21 January 2007 (UTC) Additional messages at Africa notice board and South Africa. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 20:12, 23 January 2007 (UTC)

This article is pretty well written, but lacks any inline citations. The "proper display" section is overloaded with subsections, and some of the images may not truly be free. McMillin24 contribstalk 22:16, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I went ahead and removed the Everest photo, since it is not free and lacks a source. User:Zscout370 (Return Fire) 23:09, 21 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I made the flags smaller, trying to get rid of that little open space in the paragraph that seems unseemly. It didn't work, however. Anyway to fix that?--Thomas.macmillan 18:59, 29 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC, issues unaddressed during review. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 23:16, 4 February 2007 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are lack of citations (1c), images (3), subsections (2). Marskell 12:10, 5 February 2007 (UTC)


 * What images is it lacking and what should be dealt with the sub sections? User:Zscout370 (Return Fire) 16:36, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove Fails 1c. LuciferMorgan 23:19, 5 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove per Lucifer. Trebor 22:57, 17 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove User:Zscout370 (Return Fire) 02:20, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove; fails 1c and maybe 1a; little attempt has been made. &mdash; Deckiller 04:28, 18 February 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.