Wikipedia:Featured article review/George Brown, Baron George-Brown/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by User:Marskell 09:57, 30 September 2008.

Review commentary

 * ''Notified WikiProjects. Author has quit Wikipedia.

No inline citations, lead is very short, and a lot of peacock terms flying about.  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 00:48, 29 August 2008 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are referencing (1c), LEAD (2a), and prose (1a). Marskell (talk) 12:20, 17 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Remove, certainly not a featured article in its current state. Wizardman  18:54, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Remove 1c.  YellowMonkey  ( bananabucket ) 08:28, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Remove. Agree with everything said about by, , and . Cirt (talk) 10:58, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
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