Wikipedia:Featured article review/Growth of the Old Swiss Confederacy/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by User:Joelr31 01:59, 8 January 2009.

Review commentary

 * Notified Sj, WP Switzerland, Lupo

Almost total lack of inline citations & use of foreign langauage references(english ones are preferred on the english language wikipedia). ʄ! •¿talk?  08:55, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Lack of inline citations + prose: vague terms like "some". (WP:WEASEL words. -- Redtigerxyz Talk 13:09, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Told User:Sj, WikiProject Switzerland. -- Redtigerxyz Talk 13:17, 30 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Told User:Lupo. ʄ! •¿talk?  14:54, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Per the instructions at WP:FAR, please complete the notifications and post them back to here as in the sample at Featured article review/Asthma/archive1. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 03:27, 7 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Just to clarify, suggested FA criteria concerns are referencing (1c), including issues regarding WP:WEASEL and WP:NONENG. Concerns also regard consistent citations(2b), with almost all missing page numbers contrary to WP:CITE. ʄ! •¿talk?  14:44, 7 December 2008 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concern is citations. Joelito (talk) 16:43, 21 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Delist per 1c.  YellowMonkey  ( bananabucket ) 05:44, 22 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Delist, agree with . Cirt (talk) 23:33, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
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