Wikipedia:Featured article review/Idlewild and Soak Zone/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was kept by YellowMonkey 06:23, 5 May 2009.

Idlewild and Soak Zone
1a. As I've noted on the article's talk page, there seems to be significant repetition and some disorganization. Moving the "Attractions" section up in the article might be a helpful step.

1b. There are two other short articles, Wild Mouse (Idlewild) and Rollo Coaster, which should probably be merged into this one.

I will add that I have recently given links for Google Books previews of the two most cited sources, so that may be helpful. PSWG1920 (talk) 06:01, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
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