Wikipedia:Featured article review/Laal/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed by User:Marskell 16:42, 25 September 2008.

Review commentary
1(c) Lacks inline citations, in fact has none. Tom (talk) 14:42, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Notified main contributor and nominator User:Mustafaa, WikiProject Endangered languages, WikiProject Africa, WikiProject Chad and WikiProject Languages
 * Agree with appropriateness of FAR candidate nom started by . Article would not pass a current WP:GA review in its present state, let alone the WP:FAC process. Significant improvement is needed. Cirt (talk) 17:40, 26 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Noted. I may have time to improve . Ling.Nut (WP:3IAR) 04:53, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I looked for info. It is pretty scarce; don't believe I can help, at least not right now. Ling.Nut (WP:3IAR) 22:37, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I agree that the lack of inline citations is a serious issue, specially for an obscure language - since we have no way of knowing where the info is coming from. This article shouldn't have been given FA status in the first place.KelilanK (talk) 16:55, 5 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, the sole main contributor and original nominator for FAC appears to be inactive.KelilanK (talk) 21:38, 5 September 2008 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concern is referencing (1c). Marskell (talk) 15:17, 10 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Remove 1c. no inline cites at all. YellowMonkey  ( bananabucket ) 07:27, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Remove - Agree with, and will all comments made by users above actually. Cirt (talk) 07:47, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Remove - Criteria 1c of Featured article criteria requires that FAs be "complemented by inline citations where appropriate". This article does not have this feature. maclean 23:36, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
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