Wikipedia:Featured article review/Lego/archive1

Lego

 * Article is no longer a featured article

Review commentary
Quite an old FA, appears not to meet important criteria. Todor→Bozhinov 13:00, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
 * lacks inline citations
 * needs cleanup and better structuring
 * has inappropriate (incl. inappropriately capitalized) section titles
 * external links coming before references?
 * external links awkwardly formatted
 * references awkwardly formatted
 * a trivia section is generally not recommended


 * Also - did anybody else notice the self-referentiality? Not kosher...This one needs a fair bit of work. The Disco King 22:10, 12 July 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree with the above comments - criteria 2. a. and 2. c. aren't met. Also where is the original featured article candidate page where this article was nominated for FA in the first place? I can't find it. LuciferMorgan 13:26, 27 July 2006 (UTC)

Talk message left at Wikipedia talk:Wikiproject Lego. Sandy 21:35, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Main FA criteria concerns are writing and structure (2a) and lack of citations (2c). Marskell 10:50, 28 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Remove per nom. Todor→Bozhinov 14:00, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Remove. Not Enough sources. Hezzy 20:07, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Remove per nominator and Hezzy. Tony 15:06, 29 July 2006 (UTC)
 * Message left at User talk:TodorBozhinov. Sandy 03:10, 31 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Remove, refs, tone and comprehensivness - the history for example could be a much better summary of the daughter article.--Peta 05:10, 3 August 2006 (UTC)
 * Remove refs Niz 12:54, 7 August 2006 (UTC)