Wikipedia:Featured article review/Louis XIV of France/archive1

Review commentary

 * Messages left at Biography and France notice board. Sandy 13:56, 26 September 2006 (UTC)
 * MilHist informed. Sandy 22:08, 1 October 2006 (UTC)

This article has no references, only a section of "further reading", and a misplaced template. Judgesurreal777 03:16, 26 September 2006 (UTC)


 * Commment. Brilliant prose relic. Reference or remove.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 02:23, 28 September 2006 (UTC)
 * Comment. Agree with User:Piotrus.
 * Comment. This could be a great article. But it has no references and inline citations. Anybody interested in fixing it? Is the Military project informed?--Yannismarou 08:30, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes. I missed them, but I see it has been listed there. Sandy 22:08, 1 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Comment Lacks inline citations (1. c. violation), while the "Depictions in Entertainment" needs a vast rewrite and transformation from its poor list format into 'compelling' prose. LuciferMorgan 17:28, 4 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC. After the review period, here's the diff: some minor copyediting, images moved around, but no references added.  Sandy 17:49, 9 October 2006 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are lack of citations (1c) and prose quality (1a). Marskell 10:23, 10 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Remove per comments above. It's just not good enough.UberCryxic 00:45, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Reluctant remove, because of the lack of citations.--Yannismarou 18:15, 19 October 2006 (UTC)