Wikipedia:Featured article review/Open cluster/archive1


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The article was removed by YellowAssessmentMonkey 01:05, 22 June 2009.

Review commentary

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Today I have improved a lot the number of references of this article, but it looks still so incomplete: no information about observation, about age and how to calculate it, and some sections are short (just make a comparison between this article and globular cluster). If you don't agree, close this review, but I remain on my opinion. :-) -- Roberto  Segnali all'Indiano  04:19, 15 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Comment on first view referencing looks a little sparse. Should't be too hard to save though (?) Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:25, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Most paras have one cite. Do these account for the entire (or most) of the para?  YellowMonkey  ( cricket calendar poll! '') 00:52, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are comprehensiveness and citations. Joelito (talk) 23:03, 7 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Delist, per FA criteria concerns. Also not much done to improve article since FAR nom started. Cirt (talk) 11:11, 8 June 2009 (UTC)
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