Wikipedia:Featured article review/Roche limit/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 00:13, 9 February 2008.

Review commentary

 * Notified WikiProject Physics, User:Doradus, User:Noren and User:Urhixidur‎.--Peter Andersen (talk) 16:34, 16 December 2007 (UTC)

Other editors have tagged this article for urgent attention. __meco (talk) 09:24, 16 December 2007 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria is referencing and content attention tags (1c). Marskell (talk) 08:45, 13 January 2008 (UTC)

I've left notifications at WikiProject Space, WikiProject Astronomy and Portal:Physics in the hope of generating some comments. DrKiernan (talk) 15:51, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Remove per 1c - no work done. --Peter Andersen (talk) 16:46, 1 February 2008 (UTC)


 * Comment&mdash;The article is in need of better referencing. The lead section is not a concise overview of the article, so most it should be moved down into the main body and a new lead written. I don't think the two "Derivation of the formula" sections are beneficial for most readers&mdash;they should be moved to a technical overview main article on the Derivation of the Roche limit. I'd like to see some discussion of the roche limit for solar mass black holes and SMBHs. Thanks.&mdash;RJH (talk) 20:20, 6 February 2008 (UTC)
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