Wikipedia:Featured article review/Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Miami/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 8:01, 26 December 2020 (UTC).

Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Miami

 * Notified: NancyHeise, Student7, WP Florida, WP Miami, WP Catholicism, WP Christianity, talk page 2020-11-10

Review section
This is a 2007 promotion that has not been maintained to standard. Issues detailed on talk include considerable dated information, possible POV because of omission of sexual scandals, some MOS cleanup needed, and inconsistent citations. Independently, the FAC Coord who promoted this article (ahem-- moi-- possibly my first promotion) appears to have misread the FAC, as there were not three supports (I did not promote articles on two supports). For that reason, I won't be entering a declaration and ask that others shephard this one. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  01:01, 25 November 2020 (UTC)


 * This is one I might normally try to work on, but I'm very busy in RL right now, and don't really have the time or energy. I will note that most of the article appears to be outdated, and the fact that Sexual abuse scandal in the Archdiocese of Miami is relegated to a see also link and is not mentioned in the prose is also problematic.  It at least needs a short section. Hog Farm Bacon 17:29, 27 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC, no engagement. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  07:10, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include currency and neutrality. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:09, 12 December 2020 (UTC)

Nikkimaria (talk) 18:01, 26 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist - no engagement, significant issues. Hog Farm Bacon 05:27, 16 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist. Prose isn't engaging or of a professional standard, e.g. "university of St. Thomas University in Miami. St. Thomas University", "[seminaries] serve priestly formation needs", and "Located in Hialeah, Florida, is a Diocesan seminary where the seminarians once ordained, will be at the disposal of the Archbishop for internal or missionary assignments." Lists of statistics are piled together into overlong sentences with a repetitive structure in the Catholic Health Services section. Single link to the article on the abuse scandal in the See also section is a weakness; it should be linked in the text. Occasional padding or promotional tone, e.g. "The archdiocese uses several types of media to fulfill its evangelization efforts". DrKay (talk) 15:45, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist not comprehensive (t &#183; c)  buidhe  15:12, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
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