Wikipedia:Featured article review/Suzanne Lenglen/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 19:31, 8 April 2007.

Review commentary

 * Messages left at Jeronimo, Biography and France. LuciferMorgan 18:17, 6 March 2007 (UTC)


 * No inline citations, only one very generic reference, too short lead, sub-FA prose level (one-sentence paragraphs)... would be B-level now. —Onomatopoeia 12:03, 6 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Some inline references I have added. What I find missing in the article is mention of her influence on women tennis in terms of style, dressing sense and her media darling image. STTW (talk)  21:08, 6 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Comments WP:LEAD is inadequate; WP:DASH review needed&mdash;incorrect use throughout; footnotes need publisher and author, publication date when available, and last access date on websources; the article has a lot of unattributed opinion. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 22:47, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Comment Work needed per WP:LEAD, and the structure should be tweaked. Referencing is a problem. Ceoil 23:45, 9 March 2007 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are referencing (1c), and LEAD (2a). Marskell 09:13, 24 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Remove per 1c. LuciferMorgan 09:59, 26 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove per 1c & 2a. -- King of &hearts;   &diams;   &clubs;   &spades;  02:12, 28 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove no improvements to list of deficiencies above. (Gosh that's a long sig ahead of me :-))  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 05:03, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.