Wikipedia:Featured article review/Tom Brinkman/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 17:40, 9 May 2008.

Review commentary

 * Notified User:PedanticallySpeaking, User:Spencer, User:Stepshep, WikiProject Ohio, and WikiProject Biography

The article was promoted to FA almost three years ago and I believe that it no longer meets the criteria as a Featured Article. It fails 2(c) but also it requires of cleanup in several areas. --Daysleeper47 (talk) 13:03, 31 March 2008 (UTC)
 * The references need to be completely redone, the main image features a banner reading "McEwen" when the article is about Brinkman, and it's very short. Another thing that bothers me is the slightest of details like this sentence:"Will, Stephen, Daniel, Kelley, Kevin, Michael." which really isn't even a sentence.  From my understandings the quotes and other things are formatted incorrectly.  At this time from the article's current condition I vote in favor of a delisting.  §tepshep   •   ¡Talk to me!  19:58, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * ''Suggested FA criteria concern is referencing (1c). Marskell (talk) 12:41, 23 April 2008 (UTC)


 * Delist - also the formatting and short paragraphs.  Blnguyen  ( bananabucket ) 06:36, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Remove, a wreck. External jumps, inline URL citations, uncited text, uncited direct quotes.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 00:49, 5 May 2008 (UTC)
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