Wikipedia:Featured article review/Trapped in the Closet (South Park)/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Casliber via FACBot (talk) 7:12, 15 February 2024 (UTC).

Trapped in the Closet (South Park)

 * Notified: WikiProject Animation/South Park task force, WikiProject Television, Szmenderowiecki

Review section
Nominating for FAR per notes on the talk page, primarily comprehensiveness and organization; minor issues are with referencing and images. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 00:34, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
 * The most obvious issues to me are:
 * Lead is too long, especially the second paragraph
 * Plot summary exceeds 400 words (MOS:TVPLOT)
 * Excessively long quotes
 * Legacy section is mostly sourced to primary sources and could be cut (aside from Emmys part)
 * Basically all stuff that was already noted. I'll try to shorten the lead and plot section but the controversies probably need a more thorough pruning. RunningTiger123 (talk) 02:28, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
 * I reviewed the images. I amended the rationale for the infobox, and I believe that the second image (the ad in Variety) is salvageable under WP:NFC, because there is sourced commentary about the image (note the text says it was interpreted as a sneaky allusion to Mel Gibson, instead of being the congratulations that Variety intended that ad to be.
 * I agree that the third image isn't worthy of inclusion because it's simply illustrative, so I removed it.
 * I cannot comment on proper organisation or comprehensiveness because I'm not too familiar with the subject of the article. Szmenderowiecki (talk) 12:41, 4 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC. While some progress was made shortly after it was nominated, the concerns about the balance and reception sections have not had enough attention. Z1720 (talk) 19:48, 22 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Move to FARC per above. Hog Farm Talk 13:55, 26 January 2024 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include comprehensiveness and structure. Nikkimaria (talk) 05:06, 28 January 2024 (UTC)

Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 07:12, 15 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Delist no progress to address concerns. Z1720 (talk) 21:21, 8 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Delist definitely below FA quality. &#126;~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 19:28, 9 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Delist per above, further work needed. Hog Farm Talk 04:28, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
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