Wikipedia:Featured article review/Twelfth Amendment to the United States Constitution/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 11:17, 14 June 2007.

Review commentary

 * Messages left at United States and US Congress. Marskell 07:32, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Another Emsworth nom. I'm not just concerned about inline citations but about an almost total lack of references in general in ref section (1c). About a quarter of the article is a text dump of the amendment (4), the LEAD is short (2a), and it's hard to call this comprehensive given its size (1b). Marskell 07:23, 10 May 2007 (UTC)


 * I agree. A lot of work is needed. LuciferMorgan 14:52, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are citations and reference sufficiency (1c), focus (4), and comprehensiveness (1b). Marskell 09:28, 25 May 2007 (UTC)


 * Remove per 1c. LuciferMorgan 22:11, 28 May 2007 (UTC)


 * It seems that this discussion might possibly end prematurely (I am not sure). Sjones23 20:08, 2 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Remove - Needs to be brought up to standard. Judgesurreal777 02:46, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
 * '''Remove, diff since nom. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 01:47, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove Short lead, huge text dump, no inline citations, very few refs, existing refs not formatted properly. Jay32183 02:50, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.