Wikipedia:Featured article review/Uma Thurman/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was removed 06:28, 17 May 2007.

Review commentary

 * Messages left at User talk:Fallout boy, Bio, Arts and entertainment, Films, Entertainment and Actors and Filmmakers. LuciferMorgan 19:49, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

I believe this article does not meet 1(c) and 2(a) featured article criteria. There are many tags, unsourced paragraphs, and the citations are not formatted properly. Several of the citations miss access dates, publisher info, etc. I also noticed a couple of external jumps. The lead section (one paragraph with 4 sentences) does not summarize the article as well as a featured article should. Plus, it contains a trivia section that "should be integrated into other appropriate areas of the article or removed". In the 2003–present section, the last four paragraphs look like a list, not a prose. Anyway, I hope all of my concerns are resolved in 2 weeks, and the article avoids going through FARC. Thanks, Crzycheetah 23:02, 14 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC &mdash; No changes or discussion whatsoever.-- Crzycheetah 19:15, 28 April 2007 (UTC)

FARC commentary

 * Suggested FA criteria concerns are reference sufficiency and formatting (1c), and LEAD (2a). Marskell 12:05, 29 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Remove &mdash; per 1(c) and 2(a) Crzycheetah 19:25, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove unless someone's gonna work on this. MoS issues in refs, undercited, stubby paragraphs, short lead and some dubious fair use screencaps. Trebor 14:45, 12 May 2007 (UTC)
 * Remove per Trebor's reasoning. LuciferMorgan 08:22, 16 May 2007 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.