Wikipedia:Featured article review/Witold Pilecki/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was delisted by Casliber via FACBot (talk) 2:04, 28 August 2020 (UTC).

Witold Pilecki

 * Notified: Piotrus, WikiProject Poland, WT:MILHIST
 * BUidhe, why are not all WikiProjects listed on talk notified? Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  20:31, 28 July 2020 (UTC)

Review section
I am nominating this featured article for review because of the comment left in May: "careless and inconsistent ref formatting, with both shortened footnotes and long ones intertwined. It relies rather heavily on a single web page, which I can't access, owing to its lack of proper sertificate for privacy. Is it a HQRS? And is our copy sufficiently paraphrased? We need better sourcing than what we've got here: IMDb and Publicystyka Antysocjalistycznego Mazowsza are not HQRS. We also have a See also farm and an EL farm. It is also not particularly well written with repetitive lines like [&hellip;]he was not breaking any laws. He pleaded guilty to the other charges. He was sentenced to death on 15 May with three of his comrades, and he was executed and noun + -ing, -ing, -ing He was also a vigorous advocate of rural development, founding an agricultural cooperative, heading the local fire brigade and also serving as chairman of a local milk-processing plant built in the district" These issues have yet be addressed, so here we are. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  17:51, 25 July 2020 (UTC)


 * Move to FARC, no improvement. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  23:04, 7 August 2020 (UTC)

FARC section

 * Issues raised in the review section include sourcing and prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:24, 8 August 2020 (UTC)

Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 02:04, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist (as the author of the original from 10+ year ago). This was good for our standards back then, and is not even GA level now. For starters, one should get a book about the subject and read it, which nobody has done back then (they didn't exist...). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here  03:11, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
 * we don't do "Delist/Keep" until the Featured article removal candidate (FARC) part of the process. Right now we're in the Featured article review (FAR) part, which is about finding issues and hopefully fixing them. – John M Wolfson (talk • contribs) 08:55, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
 * I find this distinction overly procedural. Shrug. You can disregard my comment and just move it to the inevitable second part of this discussion... --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 03:09, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Piotr, the reason we don't do that is that someone else might be interested in restoring the article. Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  20:39, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Delist per above. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  19:21, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.