Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/30 Rock (season 2)


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 10:00, 7 August 2008.

30 Rock (season 2)
I've been working on this article since around when this season of 30 Rock ended in May 2008 and I believe it has met the criteria. I've used the structure of 30 Rock (season 1), which is already a featured list, in this article. I'll be happy to fix any problems anyone finds in the article. -- Jamie jca (talk) 23:56, 27 July 2008 (UTC)

question Why are there two cast photos? Fasach Nua (talk) 08:08, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * One is the DVD cover. The other is just a promotional photo. The cover was released after i'd already added the promotional photo. Should the promotional photo be removed or replaced? -- Jamie jca (talk) 11:58, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It should be removed per WP:NFCC 3a. Rambo's Revenge (talk)  17:27, 29 July 2008 (UTC)
 * ✅ -- Jamie jca (talk) 21:15, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments Matthew Edwards (talk • contribs • email) 23:42, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
 * The bold title seems forced as it is separated by five other wikilinked/plain text words. Why not "The second season of 30 Rock, an American television comedy series..."?
 * "and its head writer Liz Lemon, who is portrayed by Tina Fey." --> "and its head writer Liz Lemon portrayed by Tina Fey."
 * You could wikilink timeslot
 * ""Comedy Night Done Right."[8]" Move the period outside of the quote
 * Don't overlink real person or character names. Tina Fey is linked twice in the Lede alone
 * A two or three word description of NBC would be good for non-US readers in the Crew section
 * "The TGS cast consists of three actors who are the loose cannon movie star" That bit sounds odd, and the entire sentence is really long. Try to split it, and rework it and stuff
 * Southern-born NBC page, Kenneth Parcell. Per WP:CONTEXT, don't use wikilinks for words next to each other, otherwise it looks like Southern-born NBC page, or NBC page, Kenneth Parcell. The six-pixel comma does nothing to separate them either
 * ""Episode 210," caught the attention of 6 million viewers." does this mean they watched the entire episode, or it caught their attention for mere seconds?
 * Don't use Amazon as a reference site where possible, as its a sales site
 * A two or three word description of NBC would be good for non-US readers in the Crew section
 * "The TGS cast consists of three actors who are the loose cannon movie star" That bit sounds odd, and the entire sentence is really long. Try to split it, and rework it and stuff
 * Southern-born NBC page, Kenneth Parcell. Per WP:CONTEXT, don't use wikilinks for words next to each other, otherwise it looks like Southern-born NBC page, or NBC page, Kenneth Parcell. The six-pixel comma does nothing to separate them either
 * ""Episode 210," caught the attention of 6 million viewers." does this mean they watched the entire episode, or it caught their attention for mere seconds?
 * Don't use Amazon as a reference site where possible, as its a sales site
 * ""Episode 210," caught the attention of 6 million viewers." does this mean they watched the entire episode, or it caught their attention for mere seconds?
 * Don't use Amazon as a reference site where possible, as its a sales site
 * Don't use Amazon as a reference site where possible, as its a sales site
 * Don't use Amazon as a reference site where possible, as its a sales site
 * I have seen to the points that you raised. --  Jɑɱǐε  Jcɑ  00:55, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
 * OK, cool. I wikilinked a couple of words, otherwise I can support. Matthew Edwards (talk • contribs • email) 06:13, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the support. --  Jɑɱǐε  Jcɑ  10:57, 6 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Support. As good as 30 Rock (season 1), as far as I can see.  Nice work.   Cliff smith  talk  17:35, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
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