Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Bryan Adams discography/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:The Rambling Man 08:23, 8 July 2008.

Bryan Adams discography
I'm nominating the page. All the music videos and film albums are on the Bryan Adams videography page. --Be Black Hole Sun (talk) 23:07, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Comment
 * Might as well link Bryan Adams in the lead if there is going to be no bold formatting. (DONE)
 * Italicize album titles (DONE)
 * Disambiguate the following links: On a Day Like Today, BPI, Only the Strong Survive, Sting, 101 Dalmatians, and Behind the Sun. (DONE) Something else Gary. --Be Black Hole Sun (talk) 08:55, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Gary King ( talk ) 03:58, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

Comment This is my first discography list to review, but I'll try my best here: This is all I have for now. (DONE)--Dem393 (talk) 04:07, 3 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "Sixteen" is spelled incorrectly in the lead. Even though this is true, you must change it to "16" per MOS guidelines, I think. (DONE)
 * When you say "Britain" in the lead, are you referring to the UK? Please link that word as well.(DONE)
 * Please don't strike out other people's comments. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:06, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "For a catalogue of Bryan Adams Film albums and music videos, " why "Film" not "film" and I guess you're missing an possessive apostrophe. Actually, what is a film album?  You mean a soundtrack?(DONE)
 * State Kingston is in Ontario.(DONE)
 * "he's sound incorporates" his sound.(DONE)
 * "Adult Contemporary, Rock & Roll, Arena Rock" why are these all capitalised?(DONE)
 * Numbers below 10 should be written as text.(DONE)
 * "Cuts Like a Knife'," spare apostrophe there.(DONE)
 * "He's fifth " His...(DONE)
 * "in 1987, despite favorable reviews, the " grammar here, you need a new sentence somewhere here.
 * There are more problems like this... there are too many spelling and grammar errors in this list. I would strongly recommend get it copyedited.(DONE)  The Rambling Man (talk) 10:41, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Strong oppose: Discographies on Wikipedia are not comprehensive unless music videos, video albums etc are included. See any other featured discography. I see absolutely no reason—other than perhaps to evade opposes for uncited music directors—why they should be branched off to a separate videography article.(DONE) indopug (talk) 18:36, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * More comments
 * Remove the extra apostrophe after "Cuts Like a Knife" in the lead.(DONE)
 * Link to "United States" in the lead as well.(DONE)
 * Put a comma after "In a Day Like Today" in the lead.(DONE)
 * Italicize "You Want It You Got It" in the lead.(DONE)
 * Also in the lead, change all occurences of "he's" to "his".(DONE)
 * Remove the comma between "March" and "2008".(DONE)--Dem393 (talk) 20:24, 3 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Strong oppose - recommend withdrawal for proper grammer/language/spelling clean-up. This article has basic flaws and should never have been nominated with them. The FA nom should not be used as a peer review!
 * Music videos needs to be reliable cited.

Tenacious D Fan (talk) 11:05, 4 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments I won't repeat anything that anybody has already mentioned. I've found four more to add though. I'm afraid it's an oppose for me, too. This just isn't ready at the moment. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 08:40, 5 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Kingston, Ontario, not just Kingston(DONE)
 * Does the UK really need two references in the albums?(YES)
 * studio albums, live albums and compilation albums should all use the same charts, ideally.(DONE)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.