Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Delta Goodrem discography


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted 23:23, 18 May 2008.

Delta Goodrem discography
I've been working on this article for quite some time now. I think it meets WP:WIAFL criteria. Cheers. σмgнgσмg (talk) 07:51, 21 April 2008 (UTC)

Support Looks great! Drewcifer (talk) 00:07, 27 April 2008 (UTC)

That's it for now. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:00, 21 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Caption in infobox is a fragment so remove the full stop.
 * Four paragraphs in the lead is excessive for an article of this length, consider merging.
 * You have ref's 1 and 2 in the lead but there are other claims which go uncited. Either cite the lot or none and make sure you cite the information in the list accordingly.
 * Don't overlink Sony BMG in the lead.
 * "and is currently active in the charts." - this will need a context (i.e. as of april 2008...)
 * Note A needs citation.
 * Avoid spaces between the text/punctuation and the notes (e.g. you have "I Don't Care" [A], it should be "I Don't Care"[A])
 * "I Don't Care" has an em-dash in the Album section - this means album did not chart. Was "I Don't Care" on an album?  If not then this note is incorrect, or at best misleading.
 * I think citations should be provided for "exclusive" releases.
 * The lead is really necessary as it highlights the important aspects of Delta Goodrem's career so far, and to be honest, I don't think we can condense it even further. Also, the citations for ITunes exclusive releases can't really be sourced properly as I can't provide a reference to the Itunes store itself and the web sources consist of forums and lyric pages. σмgнgσмg (talk)  12:00, 22 April 2008 (UTC)

End of round 2! The Rambling Man (talk) 15:31, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Avoid bold links in the lead per WP:LEAD, boring I know, but WP:MOS rules.
 * Caption still a fragment.
 * "later this year" just in 2008 will do.
 * Remove spaces between notes and text/punctuation.
 * A-D have full stops, then E should. Or none of them should have full stops.  Be consistent.
 * Addressed everything. Don't know about the caption though. What should it say? σмgнgσмg (talk)  01:00, 25 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have, but as it seems five countries's chart positions are not sourced, and the inclusion of a B-sides section, it's an oppose for now. -- ṃ• α• Ł• ṭ• ʰ• Ə• Щ•   @  04:20, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * "she joined the cast of Neighbours and this helped launch her international music career." This needs a citations. Perhaps include the fact that this is because she sung on the show; this would need citing, too.
 * "Her 2004 second album Mistaken Identity" sounds better as "her second album, Mistaken Identity, released in 2004"
 * "inspired by her battle with cancer," requires a citation. Any idea what form of cancer, too?
 * The rest of that sentence should be cited also
 * "After a break," caused by what?
 * I don't like the wording of "It is to be her first album in the United States and released in Europe in 2008." But I can't think right now of how to reword it
 * "Peak chart positions" should be placed as:
 * Home country
 * Alphabetical by every other country
 * World chart
 * Move the references for Peak chart postition to the column of the country they refer to.
 * I note there is only five references for the ten countries? Where did you get the information for Germany, Ireland, Netherlands, Sweden and the UK?
 * ""Predictable" Live performance at Channel V " Is this a music video, or simply a recording of a performance?
 * Why are the singles' B-Sides included? This is a discography, not a songography. If these are so notable, I would think that album tracks are even more so, but they aren't listed...
 * ""Days Go By"|Glenn Lyse|Single-only" why not "Days Go By", instead of "single-only" -- ṃ• α• Ł• ṭ<big style="color:#090">• ʰ<big style="color:#090">• Ə<big style="color:#090">• Щ<big style="color:#090">•   @  04:20, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Ok, so much to address. I'll tackle one point at a time. The suggestions you have put forward about rewording the lead, I've done that. However, as with your comment on the inclusion of source(s), it will go against what The Rambling Man has suggested. So, now I'm conflicted, what should I do? Should I include sources in the lead or not?
 * I would say yes. Anything presented as a fact should be referenced. --<small style="background:#fff;border:#800080 1px solid;color:#000;padding:0px 3px 1px 4px;white-space:nowrap">ṃ<big style="color:#090">• α<big style="color:#090">• Ł<big style="color:#090">• ṭ<big style="color:#090">• ʰ<big style="color:#090">• Ə<big style="color:#090">• Щ<big style="color:#090">•   @  18:10, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * But the information presented in the lead is verified within the article. So, technically, there is no need to add in the same sources if it is going to be repeated again and again in the article. σмgнgσмg <sup style="color:black;">(talk)  01:14, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Secondly, there isn't any much of a singificance in reorganising the peak chart positions in an order that you proposed. So, I think I'll leave it as it is for now. The sources are best put above, since the width of the table is 30px due to the logic raised by Drewcifer. His logic was: "1) the tables are big enough so that on low-resolution monitors it starts to get a little squished, and 2) it would be nice to get the certifications into the singles table, so space is at a premium there." Also, there are only 6 references required for 10 countries. Why? Source No. 5, when clicked to a specific page, such as the Innocent Eyes chart positions, gives information on the chart positions for Germany, Ireland, Netherlands, Sweden and the UK. So, the addition of further sources isn't necessary.
 * Thirdly, in regards to the phrase: "Live performance at Channel V" simply highlights that Delta Goodrem's performance on that channel was simply used as the official music video for Predictable. The B-side table has been moved to another page. And finally, the table on her writing credits has simply reworked to suit the use of "single-only". That's done and dusted. Cheers. σмgнgσмg <sup style="color:black;">(talk)  12:23, 26 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Thinking about it more, I'm not convinced on the need of writing credits to be included. This is her discography. It shouldn't mention her work on other artists' discs.

I hope my comments have helped, but I'm unable to support or oppose because I won't have internet access for the next two weeks. As such, I can only stay neutral. Sorry. -- <small style="background:#fff;border:#ff8c00 1px solid;color:#000;padding:0px 3px 1px 4px;white-space:nowrap">ṃ<big style="color:#090">• α<big style="color:#090">• Ł<big style="color:#090">• ṭ<big style="color:#090">• ʰ<big style="color:#090">• Ə<big style="color:#090">• Щ<big style="color:#090">•   @  05:55, 29 April 2008 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 15:53, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Further comments from
 * I know her career is not as distinguished nor as lengthy as, say, Metallica, but I feel the lead could do with being beefed up a bit. It currently almost borders on listprose.
 * Get rid of the full stop in the caption.
 * As for inclusion of sources, Matthew and I don't disagree, not really. You really should not include information in the lead that isn't expanded upon in the main body of the list.  Thus, you should, in principle, be able to have a citation free lead, as long as everything you state there is included, expanded upon and cited in the main body.
 * Why are you forcing the font size of the certification column?
 * And for two of the albums?
 * There are a number of directors missing from the video table.
 * Sorry, that shouldn't have been like that. Anyway, I've addressed your concerns with the exception of the music video directors. Some of the music video directors' names have not been released, hence it is why they are blank. σмgнgσмg <sup style="color:black;">(talk)  10:07, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

Just a little comments: -- Underneath-it-All (talk) 01:38, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * The album and video titles should not be in bold. It goes against MOS:BOLD (see discussion WT:MUSTARD).
 * Done. σмgнgσмg <sup style="color:black;">(talk)  06:59, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Actually there was no conclusion to that discussion, and an overall change the discography MoS has not been implemented. So you can revert it back because, frankly, it looks much better and clearer with the bolds. indopug (talk) 14:16, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Doesn't matter, what's done is done. σмgнgσмg <sup style="color:black;">(talk)  06:38, 15 May 2008 (UTC)


 * Support. Did some copyediting, all seems good to me. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 10:21, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
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