Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Green Wing (series 2)/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted 15:43, 23 April 2008.

Green Wing (series 2)
Having successfully promoted Green Wing (series 1) to featured list, I am trying to do the same with the second series. I have followed the same prinicples as I did with the previous list and I believe that this list is now of the same quality. ISD (talk) 11:21, 26 March 2008 (UTC)

That's it from me. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:44, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Sally Phillips has two l's in her surname.
 * " in the episodes that he appears in" - "in the episodes in which he appears"
 * "Other than Harley, other Green Wing writers make cameos. These include Fay Rusling and Oriane Messina.[10]" merge... "..make cameos, including..."
 * "was received less well " clumsy...
 * "one- off" rogue space.
 * "who steals some of Mac's semen and makes herself pregent." typo and exactly how did this occur?!
 * " so he tries to trick her " -who, Guy or Alan?
 * "while still trying to convince Joanna that he is having it. " reads strangely to me.
 * "and make her fly" what does this mean?
 * " takes the tape of Sue" off Sue?
 * " aSwiss Army Knife" space required.
 * "of what he thinks is her favourite thing." what was it actually?
 * " trains station" singular train.
 * Response to comments - I've carried out the changes you've asked for. ISD (talk) 15:34, 28 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments -- ṃ• α• Ł• ṭ• ʰ• Ə• Щ•  @ 17:00, 28 March, 2008
 * Can the stubby sentences "The second series was considered worse than the first by critics." and "The second series was considered worse than series one." be expanded?
 * "Amongst" sounds archaic compared to "Among"
 * Cathy Prior's review relates only to the first episode, not the series
 * Add a wikilink to Dada


 * Response to comments - I have carried the changes that you asked for. ISD (talk) 18:05, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.