Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Henry Draper Medal/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by Dabomb87 04:13, 20 July 2011.

Henry Draper Medal

 * Nominator(s): — Kai Ojima 08:45, 28 May 2011 (UTC)

Hi, this is my first featured list candidate, and I am nominating it because I believe it meets the featured list criteria, and is a highly notable subject. It contains highly detailed information on the medal, its purpose, its establishment and, of course, its recipients. All comments are appreciated! :-) — Kai Ojima 08:45, 28 May 2011 (UTC)


 * A large portion of the lead consists of quotations. I wish the number could be lowered somewhat so that I'm not merely reading quotes in the lead.
 * Hello, and thank you for the feedback. I believe that all points except for the second are now fixed. What would you like to see there in place of quotations? Thanks, — Kai Ojima 19:02, 9 June 2011 (UTC)
 * How about giving the main reasons these people won the award in your own writing, based on the information in the quotes? The lead would be more engaging if this were done.  Giants2008  ( 27 and counting ) 18:22, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments I like these kind of lists, nice to see them here. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:49, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Consider using the infobox award template. If you do this, you could then include images of recipients down the side of the table.
 * Per Giants, take a look at Crafoord Prize when it was considered featured-worthy here. I synopsised the reason for the award in each case.
 * You quote NASA's citation for Nehrels, but is that really what you should be using if the award citation is actually by the Draper Fund?
 * The second para of the lead is just a repeat of the table pretty much verbatim, I think Giants is right here, we need a re-write.
 * Ref 2 needs an en-dash.
 * A to Z of scientists in space and astronomy is used more than twice so you should make it a general reference and then just refer to the author and page numbers.
 * Ref 35 needs an en-dash.


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