Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/In Flames discography


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Matthewedwards 08:17, 31 January 2009.

In Flames discography
I'm working on this list quite a time, and finally this discography is ready to receive your comments and suggestions. Thanks in advance! Canniba loki  03:48, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Weak oppose Comment  Cannibaloki, I have been impressed with your ability to bring discographies to quality standards. However, the fact that English is not your native language (please don't take offense) has a negative effect on the prose. I am not going to tell you to withdraw, but in the future, please consider getting a native speaker to copy-edit before FLC. A couple examples before I sign off: I don't have time to do a full review, I have many other things to do. Ask User:Indopug to copy-edit the lead. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:47, 23 January 2009 (UTC)
 * "Following the same blueprint, Come Clarity (2006), topped the Finnish and Swedish charts, and reached the number 2 on the Billboard Top Independent Album" The second comma is not necessary, and neither is the article "the" before "number 2".
 * Done.
 * "The album was backed by the single "Come Clarity", that even released in a limited edition, reached the number 52 in their home country." Not a grammatical sentence.
 * Hmm...
 * "Their newest full-length" "full-length" what? Dabomb87 (talk) 03:59, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
 * "Their newest full-length album..."


 * Support - problems fixed to meet the Featured list criteria.-- TRU    CO   23:20, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Support I copyedited the lead a little bit, so now I'm happy to support. Great work! Drewcifer (talk) 23:00, 29 January 2009 (UTC)
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