Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/John W. Campbell Award for Best New Writer/archive1


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The list was promoted by Giants2008 23:08, 13 February 2012.

John W. Campbell Award for Best New Writer

 * Nominator(s):  Pres N  23:38, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

Hey all, I'm back with another science fiction award list. Having finished up the Hugo Awards a few months back, I now take a step sideways to the John W. Campbell Award for Best New Writer, an award that is presented with the Hugos, voted on in the same ballot as the Hugos, but is not actually a Hugo Award. In that vein, I use the same format as the Hugo lists, so it's the same long white-and-blue table you've seen so many times before. Everything about the award is in this list, as it's not as well-known as the Hugos so it can't support a regular article on top of the list. Let me know what you think! -- Pres N  23:38, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

Quick comments –
 * Ref 2 has a pp. for a single-page cite, which should be p.
 * Some refs (95, 97, 98, 101, 103, 106) are missing en dashes in their page ranges. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 02:46, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed and fixed. -- Pres N  03:11, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 103 is missing a range entirely now. The other stuff is fixed. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 20:14, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Whoops, now fixed. -- Pres N  00:43, 14 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * First sentence: is awarded annually to the best new...writer whose first work of science fiction or fantasy appearing in a professional publication was published in the previous two... - sounds a little awkward. Perhaps "is an award given annually to the best new...writer whose first professional work of science fiction or fantasy appearing in a professional publication was published within the two previous calendar years."
 * Intro: and who is considered one of the most important and influential - this is rather blunt. Can this be re-framed more factually? Like, "The prize is named in honor of science fiction editor and writer John W. Campbell, whose science fiction writing and his role as editor of Analog Science Fiction and Fact made him one of the most influential editors in the early history of science fiction."
 * Second paragraph: clarify here that the nomination procedure for the Campbell Award is the same as the Hugo Awards, because references 4+5 only say "Hugo Award". maclean (talk) 09:41, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed all of these. -- Pres N  19:50, 12 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Two more comments: (1) Should The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction be italized? (2) After re-reading that intro sentence, perhaps the phrase "science fiction or fantasy" doesn't need to be repeated. What do you think about " is an award given annually to the best new science fiction or fantasy writer whose first professional work of science fiction or fantasy was published within the two previous calendar years." —maclean (talk) 08:14, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, it should be (now done) and yes, that's much smoother (also done). -- Pres N  01:21, 18 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Support. All issues resolved. I've fact-checked the list of writers and the prose content. All the refs are to reliable sources (mostly The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction). maclean (talk) 17:44, 19 January 2012 (UTC)

Comments -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 18:31, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * The lede is a bit long - four paragraphs in the lede, plus another paragraph in the "Winners and nominees" section. Could that be shortened a bit?  And is the separate section necessary?  I know your most recent Hugo FL is similar, but it struck me as a bit long.
 * Images - with that many notable authors, surely there are a couple images that could be added?
 * It's a bit long, but that's because there's no corresponding "article" to go with the list, so I had to put all of the information here. The separate paragraph was originally a sentence or two, but with each of these nominations more information seems to get added to it. I've added in an infobox with a relevant image; is that enough? I could add in some authors, but I'm not sure about adding in a bunch of photos just for decoration. -- Pres N  01:21, 18 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I can understand the lede length, and it's not a show-stopper for me.
 * Despite comments below about authors not being notable for their looks, but rather for their writing, I don't think that's appropriate. This is a list of people. Having images of those people (where appropriate and copyright-friendly) makes the list that much better. I can't support it as an FL without them. -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 22:59, 6 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Regarding the images requested by other reviewers, I'd like to say that I disagree. While I'm usually the first to ask for non-essentials to be added to lists, I think, considering the subject matter, it might not be appropriate to force images onto this article. Writers become notable for their writing, not their looks. I wouldn't recognize my favorite author if I met him on the street. They're not politicians, pop-stars or professional baseball players. We shouldn't treat them the same just to spice-up our articles.  Good raise  22:14, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Support.  Good raise  22:35, 8 February 2012 (UTC)

Support - After reading through this list and looking at the sources, I find no issues that would prevent me from supporting this list's promotion to FL. To comment on a couple of issues brought up by previous reviewers: I think that the lead is a proper length for a list that does not have a corresponding article, and really a proper length overall for an entry that exceeds 70 KB. I find that I agree with Goodraise above with regards to images - they would be rather useless, IMO, because authors are not famous for their looks, they are famous for their work. If, at some point, copyright is removed from the covers of any of the works, it might be interesting to have those included, but that will most likely be decades in the future, so not something we have to worry about now! So, overall, I am happy with this list as it now stands. However, I might suggest that the nominator put neutrally worded posts on the talk pages of the editors who have commented above to see if they have further comments or concerns that are preventing them from supporting the nomination - this list has been on the page for two months now and has attracted quite a few comments but only one specific support/oppose declaration. Dana boomer (talk) 18:15, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for reviewing; I've posted to the commentors asking them to return. -- Pres N  22:54, 6 February 2012 (UTC)
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