Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Kajol filmography/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by SchroCat (talk) 08:10, 16 February 2015.

Kajol filmography

 * Nominator(s):  FrankBoy  (Buzz) 13:24, 27 January 2015 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because the filmography gives a good summary of the actress, who is known for her melodramatic yet intensive performances. The filmography has been thoroughly researched by me. As usual, looking forward to a lot of constructive comments. FrankBoy (Buzz) 13:24, 27 January 2015 (UTC)

It is a really good list. I have spotted some small changes which can be made to make the list look even better.
 * Comments from Ssven2


 * "and essayed the role of a tomboy in Karan Johar's highly successful romantic comedy Kuch Kuch Hota Hai opposite Shah Rukh Khan.[14][17][18]" — Just 1 or, at the most, 2 references would suffice.
 * "Kajol starred in inr 1170000000-grossing film Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham... (2001), an ensemble melodrama.[23][24]" — the entire part about KKKG can be rephrased as "Kajol starred in the 2001 ensemble melodrama, Kabhi Khushi Kabhie Gham..., where she essayed the role of a Punjabi girl. The film grossed ₹ 1.17 billion, therefore becoming the highest-grossing film of all time in the overseas market."
 * "a highly successful romantic thriller set on the backdrop of terrorism." — Rephrase it as "The film, a romantic thriller which was based on terrorism, was a commercial success."
 * "Also that year, she appeared in the 3D animation Toonpur Ka Super Hero." — Can you source the sentence?
 * There should be a mention about Minsara Kanavu in the lead as it is her only Tamil film to date.


 * Thank you for your comments :). I think that they have been resolved. -- FrankBoy (Buzz) 13:32, 3 February 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for addressing my comments quite quickly. This article has my Support. — Ssven2  speak 2 me 15:16, 3 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Support – Looks good to me &mdash; Vensatry (ping) 07:16, 8 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Support: I think it is a well written list based on prose. Barring anything previously mentioned above and making improvements, it's fine.
 * --Birdienest81 (talk) 02:38, 6 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Comments from Krimuk90
 * A mention must be made of the extensive work that she has done with Shah Rukh Khan and Karan Johar.
 * Wikilink NRI.
 * Mention that she played dual roles in Dushman.
 * Replace "long sabbatical" with the number of years she was absent from the screen.
 * The sudden listing of her Filmfare Awards, in between her roles in 2010, is jarring. Please mention it at the end of the paragraph.
 * In the filmography table, use footnotes to state that she played dual roles in Hamesha, Dushman, and Kuch Khatti Kuch Meethi. -- KRIMUK  90  ✉  06:19, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comments. They have been resolved. -- FrankBoy  (Buzz) 09:58, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

Support: Looks good now, after a further round of copy/edits. -- KRIMUK  90  ✉  10:09, 7 February 2015 (UTC)


 * – SchroCat (talk) 08:10, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
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