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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was archived by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:18:10 5 January 2020 (UTC).

Kalākaua's Cabinet Ministers

 * Nominator(s): User:Maile66 and KAVEBEAR (talk) 00:23, 5 January 2020 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it is a quality list and well researched and referenced and list all key politicians in the executive cabinet during the reign of Hawaii’s last king Kalākaua. KAVEBEAR (talk) 00:23, 5 January 2020 (UTC)

Reywas92Talk 21:58, 5 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Some of my comments on the other list also apply here and vice versa; please ensure the two pages are consistent and relevant changes are made to both pages
 * King Kalākaua is not the article's topic and should not be bolded
 * Perhaps Kalākaua's Privy Council of State should be linked in the lead rather than see also; Privy Council of the Hawaiian Kingdom does not link to it, nor Liliʻuokalani's.
 * The third paragraph describes the replacements for all four positions, so I am unsure what "The remaining August 14 cabinet members were replaced by new ministers on September 22." refers to
 * The lead says Cummins, et al. were installed on July 17, 1890, but these people have June 17, 1890 as start/end dates in the table. Please review the inconsistency..
 * Since there are specific cabinets of people all starting or ending their terms at the same time, I would encourage building on the suggestion on the other FLC to make the table sortable by date or have a supplementary table showing groupings of who served together, rather than solely alphabetical across the 15-year period.
 * Businessmen is one word
 * Several hyphens in the table date ranges should be dashes
 * Gibson is listed as Prime Minister in 1886. This position is mentioned nowhere else and the linked Kuhina Nui goes through 1864 so I have no idea what's going on here.
 * What does it mean that Gibson was both an acting and ad interim AG?
 * No need for an EL header if there are no ELs...

I am no longer interested in putting this through FLC. Could we please just withdraw this? — Maile (talk) 22:01, 5 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Requesting withdrawal. Co-nominator has expressed they don’t want to proceed.KAVEBEAR (talk) 22:05, 5 January 2020 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 23:18, 5 January 2020 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.