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Karisma Kapoor filmography

 * Nominator(s): 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS  🍁 13:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Karishma Kapoor is one of the most famous and widely known actress of Hindi Cinema. Recently, have added refs, re-wrote lead and tried to add all necessary things required to be a FL. All comments welcome. Thank you. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 13:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)
 * Tables need captions ("|+ " above the column header lines, or "|+ " if that text would duplicate a nearby section header). Table captions allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables, without having to read all prior text to provide context. -- Pres  N  15:15, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Check now please-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 05:53, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

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Comments from HAL
Just got interrupted... I'll get to the lead soon. ~ HAL  333  22:33, 4 August 2021 (UTC) -- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC) That's all for now. ~ HAL  333  16:44, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
 * I would place the scope on the film title rather than the year.
 * -- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:54, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Many of her roles are not correctly sorted by surname.
 * -- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:54, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
 * appearing in the commercially successful films --> "appearing in these commercially successful films"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * playing smaller parts of the love-interests in male-dominated films --> "playing smaller love-interest roles in male-dominated films"
 * Comma needed after "The film earned her praise from critics"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * several of the years --> "several of the year's"
 * I have re-written entire sentence
 * The above sentence also does not make sense. Hero No.1 is from 1997.
 * she portrayed the real life actress Zubeida Begum --> "she portrayed actress Zubeida Begum"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Change "Though" to "However"
 * "thriller Bodyguard, which ranks among the highest-grossing Bollywood films of all time." needs a source.
 * ✅ Meanwhile changed the sentence. Let me know if it's framed correctly.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Does Note a have a source?
 * -- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Hi, please have a look at the list and let me know if there are issues to resolve.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 05:05, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Hello, Can you please close the suggestions that I fixed already?. It will help me to identify the unsolved one very easily.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 19:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)}}


 * Support Terribly sorry for the delay. ~ HAL  333  19:55, 1 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "Kapoor had her first commercial success in a leading role in romantic action drama Anari (1993). Anari was a commercial success and was one of the highest grossing films of 1993" => "Kapoor had her first commercial success in a leading role in romantic action drama Anari (1993), which was a commercial success and was one of the highest grossing films of 1993"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Also, what's the source for that last bit?
 * -- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:07, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "From 1992–1996; she featured in" - no reason for that semi-colon to be there
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "The success of the these films" => "The success of these films"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "in the Yash Raj's produced musical romance" => "in the Yash Raj-produced musical romance"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Subsequently, she played leading roles in several blockbuster films, including the comedies Hero No.1 (1997)" - you already mentioned that film. The chronological order has gone a bit weird here.........
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "acclaimed performance of a disillusioned sister of Hrithik Roshan's character in the terror drama Fiza (2000), won" - no reason for the comma before "won"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "took sabbatical from films" => "took a sabbatical from films"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "during the time" => "during this time"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Within the first day of its release, it went on to become" => "Within the first day of its release, it became"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "the film and her performance received mixed reviews" - that bit should be a separate sentence
 * Check now-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "she again took sabbatical from films" => "she again took a sabbatical from films"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:51, 13 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:42, 13 August 2021 (UTC)

Source review Pass

 * @ I fixed a few more things, and everything seems fine now. Pass for source review.  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:41, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks mate, appreciate.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 15:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)

Image review Pass

 * The only image File:KarismaKapoor05.jpg is licensed under CC attr 3.0, and is confirmed in an OTRS ticket. Pass for image licencing.  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
 * @ Can you please close the suggestions that I fixed already?. It will help me to identify the unsolved one very easily.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 19:10, 2 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments from TRM

 * I have tried to resolv concerned raised by editors. Please let me know if everyone's issues addresed. Delay in promotion not letting me nominate other list. Thank you.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 17:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Support this nom. Yashthepunisher (talk) 07:44, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 21:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
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