Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Ayushmann Khurrana performances/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 25 May 2020 (UTC).

List of Ayushmann Khurrana performances

 * Nominator(s):  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  20:19, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Ayushmann Khurrana is an Indian actor. Most of his films have been widely praised by critics. All criticism about the article is welcomed. CAPTAIN MEDUSA  talk  20:19, 11 April 2020 (UTC)


 * In the discography table, Orrey Mon should be in quote marks. Also, the note against that one - "Upal Sengupta, features Ritabhari Chakraborty" - what does this actually mean?  What was the involvement/relevance of Sengupta? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * He is the composer.  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  12:44, 16 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:48, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments by Dudley
 * I think it would be helpful to give his date of birth at the start.
 * "winning the second season of the show.[1] After winning Roadies," Repetition. I would delete second mention.
 * Why not a column for the composer in the discography?
 * Looks fine. Just a few quibbles. Dudley Miles (talk) 14:10, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * All done.  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  14:58, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Support. Dudley Miles (talk) 15:23, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

Comment
 * There's a bit of a problem with sourcing. Please check WP:ICTFSOURCES for the sources that are considered WP:RS for Indian film-related articles. Some of the sources in the article belong to Pinkvilla and Bollywood Life, which are gossip sites, and are this discouraged. Same for Buzzg, Tellychakkar, Indya.
 * The lead is way too long, and contains quite a bit of extraneous information that is better suited in his biography. Please trim. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 09:47, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your comments. I have fixed the issues raised above.  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  12:09, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Ping   CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  12:10, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I've given the lead a major tweak, so the prose looks good now. Good luck! :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 08:34, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks!  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  18:35, 2 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Support this nom. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:59, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Source review – After the changes made in response to Krimuk's comment above, the source reliability and formatting now look okay. The link-checker shows no problems, so I think we can call this source review a pass. Giants2008 ( Talk ) 01:19, 22 May 2020 (UTC)

Thoughts as a drink my morning Diet Coke -- Guerillero &#124;  Parlez Moi  13:08, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Box Office India looks a lot like IMDB. Can you replace the uses to a better source?
 * everything else checks out for me
 * I have replaced the source. Also, I prefer Dr Pepper rather than Coke.  CAPTAIN MEDUSA   talk  11:25, 23 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Support -- Guerillero &#124;  Parlez Moi  15:06, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 22:18, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
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