Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Black Lagoon episodes


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The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 22:52, 25 June 2008.

List of Black Lagoon episodes
This is a list of episodes of the Black Lagoon anime. I believe it qualifies under the featured list criteria, as well as satisfying project-specific criteria such as WP:FICT. It is of similar or better status than similar anime episode lists such as List of Blue Drop: Tenshitachi no Gikyoku episodes and List of True Tears episodes. The episode summaries are not excessive in length, and other relevant information is covered. Sephiroth BCR ( Converse ) 02:21, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments Support

Gary King ( talk ) 14:58, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

That's it for the moment. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:37, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Caption is a fragment so remove the full stop.
 * Four paragraphs seems a little excessive but check WP:LEAD.
 * Might as well link first instance of DVD in lead.
 * "disk" is Brit Eng, the rest appears in Am Eng, can you clarify which Eng you're using.
 * "sympathesize" isn't an English word.
 * "in a hired mercenaries" - a mercenary or some mercenaries..
 * More copyediting required on all synopses.
 * "Amazon.co.jp: BLACK LAGOON The Second Barrage 006" - you go on to say it's Amazon.com and that it's Japanese - do you really need "Amazon.co.jp:"?
 * Same with the Amazon.com ref.
 * I think I've addressed all your concerns. Sephiroth BCR  ( Converse ) 10:00, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

Support Looks pretty good! Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 15:42, 25 June 2008 (UTC)
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