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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Giants2008 10:01, 26 February 2014 (UTC).

List of Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion R2 episodes

 * Nominator(s): DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 01:44, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Similar to the previous season, I'm hoping this can reach FL. The plot builds from the previous season so if there are accessibility issues to the general reader, I'll try to address them. DragonZero ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 01:44, 3 January 2014 (UTC)


 * Comments by Haha169

Thank you for all of the changes you've made! Just one thing catches my eye. At the end of the first paragraph, you mention that R2 takes place after the first series, then you launch into a plot summary. As I have not watched this show, can you make it more clear as to whether the short plot summary refers to the first series or the R2 series? Otherwise, I support. --haha169 (talk) 18:26, 12 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Comments by ChrisGualtieri
 * Seems to be missing some commas in the summary of the episodes. Some more optional than others: "A year after the Black Rebellion, a brainwashed Lelouch Lamperouge and his younger brother Rolo are gambling at Babel Tower when The Black Knights led by C.C. launches an attack on the complex to retrieve Lelouch." and ". The Black Knights are overwhelmed by the Knightmare Frame Vincent but are able to collapse Babel Tower in time to retreat to the Chinese Federation Consulate forcing the Britannian army to retreat." Some wording issues: "Lelouch collapses the grounding and forces the Britannian military to fall into Chinese territory where they are politically restrained from attacking." Needs to be clarified for non-viewers as to what is happening. Some sentences are a bit awkward: "However, he takes a bullet meant for Rolo and plays on his insecurities about his future and sibling relationship, convincing him to join his cause." Overall, its these little prose issues that need the most work, but this is indeed a strong candidate. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:55, 24 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Added suggested comma's.
 * Replaced grounding sentence with "Lelouch collapses the flooring, causing the Britannian military to fall into Chinese territory where they are politically restrained from attacking."
 * Replaced insecurity sentence with "Lelouch arranges a charade to seemingly save Rolo's life; using this and their pseudo-brotherly relationship, he convinces Rolo to join the Black Knights." DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 23:10, 24 January 2014 (UTC)


 * Comments by Gabriel Yuji

I support. It's excellent! Gabriel Yuji (talk) 20:03, 19 February 2014 (UTC)


 * Comments by Cirt
 * Support (having stumbled here from my FLC discussion page). Very nicely done overall by . A minor point: I'd suggest changing subsection header from "Other English releases" to "Additional English releases"., I wonder if you'd be interested in improving List of Cowboy Bebop episodes to a similar level of quality? &mdash; Cirt (talk) 22:36, 3 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I'm going to keep other though, since additional seems as if it is an add on to the North American release. I don't think I will take it up Cowboy Bebop as of current. DragonZero  ( Talk  ·  Contribs ) 09:47, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, no worries, &mdash; Cirt (talk) 11:37, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
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