Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Fernando Alonso/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 4 December 2022 (UTC).

List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Fernando Alonso

 * Nominator(s): Radioactive39 (talk) 19:28, 6 July 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it seems like a very informative list about arguably both one of the best and most popular Formula One drivers of this sport. In my opinion, this list also gives a detailed overview about the driver's statistics and achievements (in this case: Grand Prix wins) throughout the driver's career. This could attract the attention of the readers, mainly because he is a popular Formula One driver, as I said before in my brief text. Radioactive39 (talk) 19:28, 6 July 2022 (UTC)

Further comments

 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:27, 20 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments
Are you still pursuing this nomination? The above comments have been left unaddressed for two months, and the nomination will be closed soon if no actions are taken. -- Pres N  14:05, 31 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello, unfortunately I did not see the above comments. I will improve the list based on the comments as soon as possible. And yes, I am still pursuing this nomination. Radioactive39 (talk) 16:25, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * @PresN@NapHit Improvements based on the above comments have been made. Radioactive39 (talk) 16:50, 31 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Happy to support now my concerns have been addressed. NapHit (talk) 21:18, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

This has been sitting here too long, so I was hoping to review it myself and then promote it. Unfortunately, after giving the lead a copyedit, I don't feel that I can, due to one major issue: the first pargraph of the lead gives a chronological overview of his career... and then the second paragraph starts over at the beginning of his career and goes through it again. It's not at all clear to me why. Please either make the whole thing chronological, or make it more clear why some things are in paragaph one vs. two. -- Pres N  22:49, 23 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Onegreatjoke (talk) 19:14, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello @PresN, thank you for your comment! I have finally made the whole thing chronological. I hope the text about Fernando Alonso's race wins is now both well-structured and well-written. Radioactive39 (talk) 10:10, 3 December 2022 (UTC)

Alright, made a couple tweaks, but, promoting. -- Pres N  15:00, 3 December 2022 (UTC)


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