Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Lewis Hamilton/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 29 January 2022 (UTC).

List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Lewis Hamilton

 * Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

Lewis Hamilton is a British racing driver who was won seven Formula One World Drivers' Championship and a record 103 Grand Prix victories. Last year, Hamilton broke Michael Schumacher's all-time record of 91 race victories and earlier this year became the first driver to reach 100 Grand Prix wins. I believe that the list complies with the featured list criteria and submit this list for all constructive criticism. MWright96 (talk) 13:12, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

Image review — Pass
All the images are suitably licenced, and have appropriate ALT text. Pass for image review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:19, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

I'm leaning toward oppose per criterion 3c. If we have List of career achievements by Lewis Hamilton, why does this need to be a separate article? Most of the content (team, chassis, engine, race, season, placement) is also at Formula_One_career_of_Lewis_Hamilton. Reywas92Talk 14:14, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Please see my reply towards the bottom of the nomination MWright96 (talk) 09:21, 20 January 2022 (UTC)

Support by NapHit
That's it from me. NapHit (talk) 12:40, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
 * "becoming at 23 years and 300 days the youngest driver..." needs to be a comma after becoming and days
 * "unable to regain his championship-winning performances..." regain feels like the wrong word here. Match perhaps?
 * "Hamilton has so far accumulated 103 Grand Prix victories..." think so far is redundant here (from the chart image caption)
 * "...after winning the 2019 Hungarian Grand Prix, where he holds a record 8 victories" would change the last bit to 'where he was won a record 8 times'
 * Have addressed all four of your queries MWright96 (talk) 21:17, 26 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Happy to support now my issues have been addressed. NapHit (talk) 21:44, 26 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments from ChrisTheDude

 * "Hamilton achieved a further three victories that season,[3] making him the second rookie after Jacques Villeneuve to be World Drivers' Championship runner-up and equalled" - comma needed after runner-up
 * There's a couple of uses of "claiming victory", I wonder if this needs rewording? It reads a bit like there was uncertainty over who won and he went "It was me!  It was me!"  Does that make sense......?
 * "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 37 different Grands Prix he has competed in" => "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 37 different Grands Prix in which he has competed"
 * "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 36 different circuits he has driven at" => "Hamilton has won at a record 31 out of 36 different circuits at which he has driven"
 * "the five race tracks where Hamilton has driven on" => "the five race tracks where Hamilton has driven"
 * Same sentence: "and not achieved a Grand Prix victory at" => "and not achieved a Grand Prix victory"
 * That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:49, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Have made changes based on the six points you've made MWright96 (talk) 22:26, 29 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Support - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:24, 30 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments from Kavyansh
Full review: That is it. Nice one! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * @MWright96, my views about this list is bit similar to @Reywas92. Your thoughts? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 19:36, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
 * @Kavyansh Singh I believe the list complies with WP:NLIST as well as WP:GNG and I think that having put in the aforementioned list might cause that list to become bloated a little bit MWright96 (talk) 21:54, 8 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I'll try to give it a full review soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:52, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I agree with MWright96 that if we moved this list to the career achievements one, it would be too big. I think a solution is to remove a list of wins from that article and link to this one with a brief description of his record etc. There's a well-established convention for these lists, so I don't think 3c applies, as it's not derivative and wins is one part of his career achievements. NapHit (talk) 16:55, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I just wanted to know the nominator's thoughts. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:33, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * "Hamilton achieved a further three victories that season" — should be "Hamilton further achieved three victories that season"
 * Reworded slightly differently MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * "and former childhood friend Nico Rosberg," — that means during the time of incident/collision, they were not 'childhood friend[s]'?
 * Changed MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * "are the six races he has entered and not won" — 'not won' can be replaced by 'lost'?
 * I think the current wording is fine MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Have made changes where appropriate MWright96 (talk) 18:26, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I support the nomination. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:25, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed, except for one misuse of |format to add extra links to the "next" pages of a paginated results url. Fixed; promoting. -- Pres N  02:42, 28 January 2022 (UTC)


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