Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Sebastian Vettel/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by The Rambling Man via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 11 June 2020 (UTC).

List of Formula One Grand Prix wins by Sebastian Vettel

 * Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 14:59, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

This list is about a German racing driver called Sebastian Vettel, who is a four-time Formula One world champion with 53 race victories over a 12-year career. I believe that the list complies with the featured list criteria and submit this list for all constructive criticism. MWright96 (talk) 14:59, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Comment from Dey subrata
 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:45, 17 April 2020 (UTC)

There is only one suggestion, it would be good if you add ref. 1 and 10 as external links too seeing the importance and number of times the references used, and also the scope of future improvement and for further research. Dey subrata (talk) 05:41, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Added external links MWright96 (talk) 06:58, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Support -- seems ok to me. All the best. Dey subrata (talk) 08:09, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Support Well done! ~ HAL  333  15:52, 31 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Source review – The reliability and formatting of the sources look fine, and the link-checker tool doesn't indicate any problems. I'd say this sourcing review is a pass. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 22:43, 2 June 2020 (UTC)

That's all from me. I've copyedited some of the image captions to make them flow better as well. NapHit (talk) 16:33, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * "and becoming the youngest driver to score a world championship point in Formula One." - change and becoming to 'to become, to avoid WP:NOUNING
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "Vettel was signed to race for Toro Rosso..." I'd just say 'Vettel joined Toro Rosso' makes the sentence flow better
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "...was the youngest two, three and four-time world champion in history." Do we have a ref for this?
 * Added a reference from BBC Sport MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "His first Grand Prix win came in the rain-affected 2008 Italian Grand Prix on 14 September, becoming the youngest driver..." change the comma after September to a semi-colon and replace becoming with 'he became' to avoid the NOUN+ing structure
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "His first season with Red Bull in 2009 saw him win four races and finish runner-up to Jenson Button in the points standings." -> He won four races in his first season with Red Bull in 2009 to finish runner-up to Jenson Button.
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * "His 2013 season included 13 Grand Prix victories, equalling seven-time world champion Michael Schumacher's record of most wins in a season." change equalling to which equalled and change the of after Michael Schumacher's record to for.
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Again, change equalling to 'to equal'
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Change note a to "The current holder of this record is Max Verstappen who finished seventh at 2015 Malaysian Grand Prix when he was 17 years, 180 days old.
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Likewise, change note b to "The current holder of this record is Max Verstappen who won the 2016 Spanish Grand Prix when he was 18 years, 228 days old. Only link to Verstappen in the first note too.
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your comments. I've addressed them all. MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
 * Happy to support now my concerns have been addressed. NapHit (talk) 18:14, 3 June 2020 (UTC)


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