Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Jewish Medal of Honor recipients/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Matthewedwards 22:39, 27 June 2009.

List of Jewish Medal of Honor recipients

 * Nominator(s): Kumioko (talk) 13:14, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it meets the criteria for a featured article Kumioko (talk) 13:14, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:52, 25 June 2009 (UTC)

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:52, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Ref 7 needs a publisher and last access date.
 * Done.--Kumioko (talk) 00:18, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


 * In ref 1, the Bartleby link to "Jew" only goes to the main page. Dabomb87 (talk) 13:14, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
 * This has not been resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 13:53, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Done. Sorry it took me so long I couldn;t find it on the web and I was struggling with the Note formatting. I had to change it to a book citation and I wanted to verify that it was actually in the book. If you look up Jew in The free dictionary it uses the same verbage taken from the same book (older version though). Let me know if its still not right.--Kumioko (talk) 15:37, 25 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Comment - Names are not sorted properly. It's probably because the people who were award posthumously are sorted wrong somehow. --  SRE.K.A.L. &#124; L.A.K.ERS ]]  21:39, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
 * Done. Its because I had the * before the nowrap. Its fixed now--Kumioko (talk) 00:11, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments
 * There should not be a space between "Jew" and the footnote in the first sentence.
 * Done.--Kumioko (talk) 12:23, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


 * "absorbed into the Jewish community throughout the millennia" - Which millennia? The millennia Before Christ too?
 * Done. I reworded this.--Kumioko (talk) 02:28, 22 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Quotations should be cited in the lead per WP:LEAD.
 * "This along with the *, indicates that the Medal of Honor was awarded posthumously" - I don't think a comma is needed here.
 * Done.--Kumioko (talk) 13:01, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


 * File:JackHJacobs.jpg needs a non-free use rationale.
 * Done, I don't usually mess with images though so someone should take a look and make sure I did it right.--Kumioko (talk) 12:23, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Other than that it looks pretty good. Nice work!  The Le ft ori um  09:42, 21 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Support--- Balloonman  NO! I'm Spartacus! 02:25, 27 June 2009 (UTC)


 * Support good work on addressing my concerns. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:06, 27 June 2009 (UTC)
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