Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Mercedes-EQ vehicles/archive1

List of Mercedes-EQ vehicles

 * Nominator(s): 750h+ 17:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

This is my first featured list nomination. This is a list of all the Mercedes-EQ models, including the production and concept models. If this gets promoted, it will be the first automobile featured list. Thanks, and enjoy the read! 750h+ 17:25, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Hey man im josh
I'll do a larger review later on, but for now I want to point out some accessibility issues.
 * You used  when you should have used  . For instances where a row span would only be 1, do not use the rowspan parameter. For instances where you do need to specify a rowspan, you would do.
 * Add column scopes
 * Tables needs a title

Again, I'll be back to a larger review later on. Hey man im josh (talk) 17:35, 12 July 2024 (UTC)


 * those should be addressed now 750h+ 17:51, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Source review: Passed
 * Reliable enough for the information being cited
 * Consistent date formatting
 * Consistent and proper reference formatting
 * Appropriate wikilinks where applicable
 * Spot checks on 15 sources match what they are being cited for

Feedback:
 * Consider adding the template to the top of the article under the short description in case anybody else adds references later on and they are not as careful as you've been
 * done


 * Why is there no body style listed for the concept vehicles?
 * i couldn’t find any references


 * Ref columns should be unsortable
 * done


 * Article needs a short description, even if set to none
 * done


 * Ref 9 – Add David McHugh as the author and Associated Press as the agency
 * done


 * Ref 16 – Add author and USA Today as the agency
 * done


 * Ref 20 – Add author
 * done


 * Ref 38 – Add author
 * done


 * Ref 41 and 48 – Change the website to U.S. News & World Report
 * done


 * Ref 46 – Add author
 * done

That's what I've got, good stuff! Please ping me when you reply. Hey man im josh (talk) 14:48, 15 July 2024 (UTC)


 * thanks! All addressed, . 750h+ 15:13, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Support. Hey man im josh (talk) 15:15, 15 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Much thanks for the review! 750h+ 15:15, 15 July 2024 (UTC)

Commentd

 * "which was to be launched a few years later" - a bit vague....?
 * There's three consecutive sentences that basically all start "They unveiled...." - any chance you can vary this a bit?
 * "produced several concept cars, such include" - wording's a bit mangled here, I think
 * The headings that include "(cal. year)" look a little odd. Why not just "(year)"?
 * Is "SIP" a standard/well-known abbreviation in the motor trade? If not, I would write it in full or even use a N/A template -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:55, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
 * All have been addressed. Thanks for reviewing! 750h+ 02:47, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 06:46, 14 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! 750h+ 08:13, 14 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments from Steelkamp

 * Should the last sentence of the lead have a reference?
 * added


 * Is it necessary to include "where various other electric cars—including the Opel Ampera-e and a redesigned Renault Zoe—debuted"? This article should really be focusing on Mercedes-EQ, and not feature unrelated cars prominently in the lead.
 * removed


 * Why does the concept vehicles table not have a body style row?
 * I couldn't find any good references for some of the classes, so I just didn't add them


 * Some websites in the citations aren't wikilinked. E.g. two instances of CNET and three instances of The Verge. There might be some others I haven't noticed.
 * added


 * Specifying a px size for images should generally not be done as per MOS:IMGSIZE. It's fine for the images in the table (which is given as an exception in MOS:IMGSIZE), but for the lead image, the fixed px size should be replaced with.
 * done

That's all. Steelkamp (talk) 08:48, 13 July 2024 (UTC)


 * All have been addressed. Thanks for the review, . 750h+ 10:21, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Support. Steelkamp (talk) 14:59, 13 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! 750h+ 15:01, 13 July 2024 (UTC)